Lessons Learned From Writing Fan Fiction #5: Research is King (of the Time Suck)

In my quest to make the leap from fan fiction to original fiction writing, I’ve been noting some lessons I have learned from writing fan fiction these last few years.  You’ll find Lessons #1-4 on the sidebar right… there —->

So we’ve come to Lesson 5 in my short list of the good stuff I have learned from being a fan fiction writer.

#5: Research is King (of the TimeSuck)

You know how it is. You sit down to write a story about… I don’t know. Harry Potter in Space. But you’ve never written about space. Nor have you ever written about Harry Potter. Let’s skip the part where this probably isn’t going to be a good story and note the steps taken. You’ve already figured out what’s supposed to happen in the story, who your characters will be, and where your story takes place (in space, DUH). The first thing you’ll need to know is what they call that thing that astronauts live in, and also how much oxygen is in there, and how big is one of those things, and how many people can you fit in a space ship, and how long would it take for a ship to travel from Hogwarts to Mars… and now it’s 5 hours later and you haven’t written a single word.

I’m BIG on research. HUGE on research. I want the details to be as exact as possible. In AIWD, my main character and his love interest are adopted. I have no idea what that feels like. Cue research. I sent them to Orlando, South Carolina, Baltimore, New York, Tennessee, New Orleans, Phoenix and Los Angeles and GREECE. I have only ever been to New York (but I went AFTER I wrote the story) and Los Angeles. Cue research. My male MC is a musician. He gets a guitar for Christmas. NOT ONE CLUE ABOUT GUITARS. Cue research. My female MC works in Marketing, something I know little about. RESEARCH.

When I am in the throes of a story, the #1 thing that can distract me is research. I will type something, want to be sure  about it, and look it up. I need to describe a hotel, a street corner, a house? Google what I imagine in my head, do an image search, and base my words off of that image. I did this a lot when I sent my characters to Greece. But I would find that, an hour later, I am still looking at pictures of Mykonos and Santorini and also do they speak english there and are there tours and what is the temperature in April and how does a person get from Point A to Point B and how long is the ferry ride and does that fit in my story?

Is research important? YES.

Can it suck your time something fierce? YES.

Is it a great mode of procrastination? YUP.

Tips/Lessons Learned:

1.  Write out my questions beforehand.

1a. Set aside specific time for research that is NOT my writing time. I know what’s coming ahead in each chapter and the details I am going to need to include. I set up some research time and go at it. GO HARD or GO HOME! And then once the majority of my questions are answered and I have my photos and websites bookmarked and information I need, I can start writing.

2. While writing, if something comes up… and it sounds hard to do and it IS..   I skip it. I leave a note to myself to look it up at my next research session. I am an obsessive editor, so likely when I pass it again a day or so later, I will fill in the blanks. This gets easier as time goes on and I lose my ‘it needs to be perfect the first time I write it or it’s CRAP’‘ mentality.

3. Get a good gauge for what is too much information and what is not enough.  When I read a book and my eye starts to wander at the 3/4ths of a page description of a garden, I become more attuned to that in my own writing. I have gone from long drawn out imagery of a hotel room to a scant sentence and a half. And a good tip I have learned is that the scenery isn’t really important unless it’s part of the action. The chair sitting cockeyed doesn’t matter, unless the chair is NEVER cockeyed or your MC trips over it on his way to X location. Using words, imagery, description, just to use them is filler, IMO.

Tighten, lighten, less is more.  

 

How are your research skills? How do you manage your research time? Is it a suck or do you have it down pat? Share your tips in the comments below! 

HOLY SPUMONI (and other exclamatory utterings)! I’m going to be featured at Indie Ink!

Holy wow. Well. I just got some very good news, Blog People. I’ve been very shy about submitting work, but I finally got up the nerve to submit to Story Fix. I did not die or explode. This is good news.

At the same time, I must have sent the piece to Indie Ink.  IndieInk.org is an online writer and artist collective. It’s a great place to shake off the extra and just read some writing and look at some art.  I got notification this morning that my piece Try to Say No will be featured at Indie Ink. THIS IS EXCITING, OMG. It should be up first thing in the morning at Indieink.org!  I will of course post tomorrow and send everyone to the live link. YAY!

I have to admit, I’ve had a bit of the jealousies lately. I see so many people who haven’t been “working on their writing” getting writing jobs. It’s really been sticking in my craw, lately. But it’s my own fault, because I don’t submit my work or writing samples to even see if I could write for an online magazine or sell my stories.

Things like this are so, so encouraging to me. I will definitely be writing more and submitting more!

And also, I will get to put this fantastic badge on my blog!

So YAY! \o/

Writing Lessons from Fan Fiction #4: On Characterization

This week, I’ve been posting the lessons I’ve learned about writing from Fan Fiction. Not only has it been great practice but it has taught me some things about writing.

1: Take your writing seriously. Even if it’s for fun. Just because it’s fan fiction doesn’t mean it isn’t real writing.

2: Take the good with the bad, and invent a strategy that helps you deal with either situation- fawning fans or booing boors.

3: Stay on task. Figure out what method works for you. Plan it, schedule it, do it!

Today I want to talk about characters, because this, besides the “world” is probably the crux of most fan fiction.

Lesson #4: How to Establish and Maintain Consistent Characterization

I don’t honestly read much fanfiction outside of my own fandom. On occasion I have read some Criminal Minds fan fiction, so let’s use this as an example. If you’re a fan of the show, you know the characters are well-defined. My friends and I talk about Hotch, Reid, Morgan, and Garcia as if they are actual people and not roles for actors. Actors “get into the skin” of the character they portray and to us, the viewing public, they almost ARE those characters. When you take Derek Morgan, for example, and write him into a fictional situation borne of your mind, readers want him to resemble Derek Morgan. There are very few circumstances in which it would be okay to change a well-known character’s personality without a very good, plot driven reason.

Viewers, readers and fans fall for (and in love with) personalities, characteristics, traits and mannerisms. Vocabulary, diction, dialect, even how s/he might shake the hair out of their eyes or stretch their muscles after long, hard day are things our minds subconsciously pick up. When  writers “borrow” these characters, it is of utmost importance to stay true to these minute details.

How do I “Stay In Character”?

Study. Study study study. Read other fan fics. Watch video, read interviews. Any piece of material that you can get your hands on that will aid you, use it. For me, audio and video are the best. On occasion, photos help as well, especially if I have to include a description or I have to describe a particular stylistic era in their career.

The other side of this characterization is a supporting cast. Unless your piece is a monologue, you will have other characters that weave into and out of the pages of your story. Some will be recognizable like your borrowed character. Some will be original. They still must be believable. If you write a love interest (for Derek, for example), you want to write a woman that he would be attracted to, that you could “see” him going for. He seems to like pretty ladies with long hair who have a little sass. If, in your story, he falls for the complete opposite, this will be a hard sell for readers, especially if their investment is in Derek and not your original character.

As an aside, never EVER go all Mary Sue (characterized as a female lead who resembles the author in many ways, except she is perfect and does no wrong). Make your characters, especially your female leads strong and well-rounded. They have lives and back stories and plot points all on their own. At some point, their story arc crosses your main character’s, and that’s where the story gets interesting. Give them faults. Give them conflict. Put some chinks and weaknesses in the armor– this makes your character entirely more interesting. A perfect female lead who does not bring spark to the table is just boring.

No matter what you choose to write, believability is tantamount. I have to be able to buy what you’re selling. My belief has to be suspended in order to get lost in your words. I wrote a story about a pop star who falls in love with a groupie. Believable and predictable on the surface, but my main character is the laid back type… he’s not really going to work hard to keep her, to jump through hoops to make her happy. I had to give her something that he would hook onto, something they had in common that would get his attention, and because she had his attention, he would be more invested in carrying on a relationship with her, even though she was pretty darned flawed. I mean, REALLY. She had ISSUES.

Chinks in the armor. Conflict. An original character that is a match for my main character and someone my reader could sink their teeth into.

 Bottom Line: If you don’t “Buy It”, your readers won’t, either.

Writing Lessons From Writing Fan Fiction #3: Staying on Task

Welcome back friends! I’ve been posting this week about the lessons I’ve learned about writing from writing Fan Fiction. Not only has it been great practice but it has taught me some things about writing. In review:

Lesson 1: You’re writing. Believe it. You MUST believe in and treat your work like it is real writing, because it is upon this work that you will improve. One cannot get better at writing without writing– you can read all the writing books you want to read, but unless you put it into practice and take it seriously, improvement will be hard to come by.

Lesson 2: Along with the good (reviews) comes the bad (reviews). Learn how to deal with them both! Don’t engage in criticism that doesn’t help you improve your work, and don’t make readers who love your work feel stupid for loving it. Remove the ‘this old thing’ response and say thank you!

Today we’ll talk about Lesson 3:

How to Stay On Task

Quite often in Fan Fiction, stories are posted as serials, meaning a writer might post a chapter or two, and build on the story as time goes on. Weekly or monthly, bi weekly, or as the chapters/sections come forth, the updates get posted. This builds a following and, if you do it right, keeps your readers on the tip of their toes waiting to find out what happens next.

There is nothing so disheartening as getting involved in a story and finding it unfinished, and that the author hasn’t updated their story in weeks. Or months. There are a few stories that I longingly stroke and nuzzle, hoping the writer will come back and satisfy my need to see the story line end. Sometimes a writer just ‘loses’ the story. Sometimes the writer never had the story in the first place. I see lots of ‘idea starts’ that never end up in completed stories, either because the writer has spread him/herself thin over so many pieces or because the writer was unable to stay on task.

The importance of keeping yourself on task is not  only necessary if you update in real time and want to keep your audience engaged. It also transfers to any writing project that you have underway, including original fiction and blogging. However you plan your stories (build on a concept and then write, outline the entire story, or just sit down and write) or your posts, it is helpful to stay a few steps ahead of whatever point your readers have reached. If I don’t know ‘what happens after this‘, a chapter doesn’t get posted, because I don’t want to write myself into a corner that I can’t get out of.

If it helps to keep yourself on a schedule, do it! I used to plan for a few days, write Thursday, Friday and all day and Saturday, have the chapter Beta’d and then posted by Sunday night. Sometimes this schedule slipped, especially if I was having a hard time, but knowing that people were waiting to read what happened is amazing motivation. This can apply to blogging as well. If it helps to build a schedule, build and establish one. If you want to post about certain things on certain days and it keeps you motivated, do it. Whatever works to keep you on task is what you need to do.

Do you have trouble staying on task, blogging on a schedule, providing timely updates? How do you manage your writing schedule?

Writing Lessons from Fanfiction #2: How to Take the Good With the Bad

Yesterday I introduced this week’s topic, “What I’ve Learned About Writing from Writing Fan Fiction”, with the first lesson that anyone with a talent for writing will have to eventually convince themselves:  Fan Fiction writing is real writing.  While we don’t produce material that can be bought and sold, it is writing all the same. Anyone who’s writing fan fiction should consider their pieces to be their novellas, their novels, their short stories and be as proud of them as if they were being bound and printed. Today’s Lesson can be a hard pill to swallow.

Lesson #2: How to Take Your Lumps, and I’m not talking about the Lady kind.

They say we are our own worst critic, and that adage applies to every writer I know. The pages of this blog are full of whining and moaning about my writing not being as good/deep/prolific/magical/life changing as I’d like it to be. Once I’ve edited a piece to the nth degree, there is nothing so nerve-wracking as putting it up for public consumption and hoping that people don’t hate it.

What If They Hate It?

I always try to measure negative reviews against positive but the lone dissenting opinion can weigh heavily, especially if you don’t really get a reason as to why they don’t like your latest work. If readers hate your work and are so bold as to tell you so, what do you do?

I’ve read post after post about what to do about negative reviews. The answer is NOT to fly off the handle and get into a comment war. My personal rule is that a negative review has to have merit. This sucks and so do you doesn’t tell me much.  If they don’t expound upon why they think it (or I) sucks, I delete it. Criticism should be constructive, otherwise it’s simply childish meanness that I have no use for. Help me get better or shut it.

Or go into further detail about the suckage… exactly what part inhales wind?

What If They Like It?

But what if they don’t hate it? What if they ooh and aaah and swoon and you sit back and *squint* your eyes and say ‘Really? Because… I mean, it’s totally weak from here to here and I obviously flubbed this and that and I can’t believe you actually like the ending…’

Well. Don’t do that. A few lives ago, for a very short time I was a Personal Assistant for a fledgling Christian Music group. And yes, even Christian groups have groupies. One of the first thing that group members are taught is to not downplay themselves in front of fans. When fans fawn, don’t insist that you’re not like, totally awesome and you don’t like, totally rock. Say thank you. Smile. Express your appreciation. Sign whatever they want you to sign. Don’t make them feel stupid for thinking you’re great.

I think this is a lesson that any artist or writer could take to heart. It’s tough when we’re so supercritical of ourselves. And we want to stay humble– no one wants to be the pompous ass who thinks s/he is the greatest in the world. Trust me– if you were a pompous ass, it would have become apparent long before you wrote a great story/book/ chapter.

Bottom Line: Try to take something from everything, the good AND the bad. You never know when ‘this sucks because…’ might help you in the future.

Do you have a hard time accepting praise or criticism? How do/did you battle it?

What I Learned About Writing From Writing Fan-fiction- Lesson #1

I recently read a blog post where an author wrote about his disdain for fiction (I’m not going to link the post because I don’t want any trouble, man).  He really, really dislikes it, and not just because some of it is really, really bad. Granted, he meant fan created stories based on novels like like Harry Potter, Twilight, etc. His perspective is understandable, given that some authors don’t want their work fanfic’d (I heard, for example, that a particular romance author will string you up by your fingernails and I don’t know about you but a) I’d never fanfic one of their novels and b) I need my fingernails to type!). If I was a published author, I wouldn’t want a “bad”writer messing with my characters, either.

He said (paraphrasing) that it was lazy and and unimaginative to borrow a world and put those characters in different situations than the author intended– and frankly that is why I never did a REMIX, where people take your stories and do exactly that: put your characters in different situations, with your permission, even changing the story line and outcome. If I wanted it written that way, I would have done that!

So how can I feel that way about my stories but still write fan fiction?  Well, for one there is a difference between ficcing a fantasy story in which the author has worked hard to create an alternate universe, such as Harry Potter or Lord of the Rings, etc and RPF.  RPF (or Real Person Fiction) borrows the public image of a person and writes them in fictional situations.

I’m trying to make that sound the least creeptastic as possible. Trust me, it was hard.

Since the persona is public and writers try very hard to maintain the “us & them” (i.e. there are some things we just don’t touch) wall, there really isn’t a ‘world’ to borrow, except the one they ‘work’ in. If they’re an actor, a singer, or have some other public job, that tends to carry over into stories because that is what is familiar to fans.

I read his post and nodded along and sure, I understand his point. He also admitted to never writing any fan fiction and except for a few bad apples, never really explored the fan fic world. Of course, down here in the amatuer ranks, there are good writers and there are “Uhmmm,  I don’t understand the point of the story, and have you ever heard of punctuation” writers.  I remember when I discovered fiction based on my favorite member of a music group and  feeling like it was pretty creepy and I refused to even entertain the notion. Then I wanted to see if I could do it. Three years later,  I am still writing.

Why?  Because it taught me some things about writing.

That post about an author’s hate dislike of fan fiction brought to mind the bad fic I’ve read and how I’ve tried to avoid being that writer that people avoid. It also spawned an idea  –Writing Lessons Taught by Fan Fiction.

A simple Google search will net you authors who got their start in fan fiction. It’s great practice to hone your skills, to cut your teeth on something you’re really interested in. The more you write, the more you learn about writing, and I’ve learned a lot. I’ve asked a few of my fellow writers at various story archives to weigh in on this topic with any lessons they’ve learned along the way. At the end of the week I’ll compile and post them as, hopefully, a long list of things that writers can look forward to learning from writing fan fiction.

Lesson #1: Fan Fiction is real writing.

We create original characters, backstory, an effective arc, plot, setting, dialogue… the whole bit. There is no script to mimic.   Typically, stories carry a character in name and a few recognizable characteristics. The rest is invented and whether the story is 1,000, 10,000 or 100,000 words, it is a new creation. Words appear on paper and from beginning to end, tell a story. That’s writing.

And that isn’t fake.

Fan Fic writers don’t write for publication or money or notoriety. We’re not trying to sell a book or hook an agent or find out how to get published. We write purely for fun, for recognition, and to be part of a community. And, if you have talent and can weave a great story, you can achieve a small following of people who read and respect your work and offer honest feedback and criticism. It’s a built-in critique group and, over time, this singular focus on writing alone  is what builds better writers.

Stay tuned this week for more lessons from Fan Fiction’s Knee. If you are or know a Fan fic writer, I hope you’ll pass along this week’s posts!

Are you or have you ever written Fan Fiction? What are some of the things you learned from writing it? 

The Rare Saturday Post- Reading, Writing, and Random Babbling

*waves to BlogLand*

I have been a bit absent this week. Mostly because I didn’t have much to say and I’m not one to post just for posting’s sake. And, as Sierra Godfrey mentioned in a great post this week, readers don’t really care what your excuses are for not blogging; nor do they care for silly filler posts. I happen to completely agree, so I don’t do them.

It has been a busy month for me though. Over at the Fan Fiction archive, we have been running a month long challenge. Writers sign up for a specific day and on that day, they post a completed story of 1,000 words or more. Once it is posted, it’s my job as Challenge Master (I just made that name up for myself) to publicize the author and their story all day. Everyday. On top of also running a fansite for a music group, my life outside of writing/ reading is pretty active.

And then there’s that. I’ve not done a whole lot of writing, lately. I wrote two stories for the aforementioned challenge. Both got pretty small reactions, but that they got comments at all is great, I suppose. A friend and I were discussing this phenomenon a few weeks ago, where when I posted stories in the past, I got lots of comments and lately I get very few. I started to worry that I lost my touch, my mojo, my writing fu. We discovered, though, that readers seem to like the chase. They like waiting for an update and slowly allowing themselves to identifywith the characters. When I write a story, however, I finish it and then I post it, in case I want to change/clarify something later. I can’t go back and change something I have already posted. And then I dump it on the archive and people read it all in one sitting, in one fell swoop and don’t feel as close to the characters as they would if I had spaced it out.

What it all comes down to is that I am impatient. I want people to read it all right now. I’m not much of a tease. Working on it, though!

I posted a short piece for the Story Fix Peer Review Page and then sent my friends and followers over there to harass and/or comment on the post. It turned out pretty well and I feel like I got some good advice from the writing community. And a few “wow”s, which… I’m not going to lie, felt really great. REALLY great. The piece wasn’t torn apart and I feel like it was a good representation of my writing.

I have been doing a lot of reading. I’m doing the GoodReads Reading Challenge. I committed to reading 50 books this year. I’m at 30 and I am 2 books behind. I’m really tempted to pick some short novellas and finish them to boost my count, but I feel like that would be cheating, so I am doing my best to stay on top of my TBR pile. My hiatus from the written word hurt me a bit but I am rapid and voracious reader. I was five books behind!  In the last month I have read:  Continue reading

Writing Wednesdays 8/24: In which I am featured at StoryFix!

Photo courtesy Melissa Wilkinson | Photobucket.com

Good Wednesday Morning, Fellow Writers! I have an exciting announcement today!

After much nervousness and changing my mind and changing it back and finally just putting my big girl pants on and DOING IT, one of my pieces- Try to Say No- is featured on the Peer Review Page at Story Fix! Yay!

And I already have one comment in which someone does NOT hate it! Even more yay! (It’s pitiful how big my smile was when I saw that first comment.)

If you’ve been following this blog for awhile, you’ve seen the evolution of this piece. I have reworked it since it appeared at Short-Story.net and I feel it is the best it has ever been.  Something about the past tense wasn’t working for me. I changed a bit of the imagery, revised the tense, punched up some scenes and removed some “explanation”. Sometimes it’s better to just let the words stand for themselves and let the reader figure things out. It really is a process, you know?

It is… nerve wracking to have your work posted for public consumption, especially on a site where so many will see it. It is not unlike that nightmare we have where we arrive at school naked and everyone can see our private bits.  Even worse than someone having something bad to say is no one saying anything at all, especially if you are kind of proud of your private bits. A piece generating zero reaction is… well. I mean. A failure. So I am at least hoping for really good or really bad comments.

But seriously, really good comments would be great. I’m also hoping for some constructive criticism on how I could improve it or what doesn’t work.

I want to thank my friend Sarah over at He Loves Me Not, who gave me a swift kick in the pants and made me submit after she was so kind as to review it for me.  I submitted it yesterday and I expected it to be a few days but it is already up and available to read and review. If you have a few extra moments, please pop over and take a read and leave a comment about how terrible awesome it is.

Why I Write.

Photo By lynne bernay-roman

I’m up early, as is the norm these days. It doesn’t matter what time I go to bed. My body will wake up around 6:30, whether I’m done sleeping or not. So, I’ve been awake for awhile.

I love the quiet of an early morning. It’s even too early for social media to be much of a distraction. The sun has just come up over the horizon. The day is still sort of pink. It’s not even warm yet, but my fans run almost non-stop. I need to circulate the air.

I sleep with my laptop next to me. Actually, all of my devices share my bed. Two cell phones, Nookie, and my laptop all charge while I sleep. When I roll over in the morning, it is an automatic response to reach for something. I’m addicted to email. Seriously. Unread email drives me bonkers. I love to wake up in the morning to responses from the night before– blog posts or discussions or emails to people in other countries whose day has already begun.

This morning, in my early morning internet jaunt while I’m still lying in bed, I came across a few posts where people were discussing why they write. I read stories of writers who have known they were the next Great American Novelist since they were children. Writers who were influenced by someone or something. Writers who recently discovered the power of the written word. It made me think, to ask myself the same question:

Why do I write?

Why, when it’s so frustrating for me, lately? Why, when I seem to be not writing more than I am actually putting “pen to paper”, so to speak. Why don’t I quit?

Why do I write?

To make the voices shut up. When something really gets going in my mind, it is a record on repeat, playing the same song until I’m singing along. And I’m not actually singing, I am talking. Playing the scene out in the car, at home while watching TV, whatever. If you pass me on the freeway, I’m usually talking. I’m not on the phone. I’m talking out a scene. Doesn’t everyone do this?

To feel accomplished. There are few things I’m really good at, that I can show off. I am not musical. I am not athletic. I’m smart but not brilliant. I can’t do magic tricks and I am not a gymnast. But with my words, I reveal

talent. With my words, I’m a show-off. With my ability to paint a picture on paper or help a person escape to another world, I am a genius. It’s something I’m good at. I excel at. Even if I don’t always feel that way about my own work and even if I’m not writing more often than I am writing.

To encourage others. I took a very long break from writing. Years. Decades. When I decided to kick it back up again, I was so encouraged by other great writers. To this day, I love to read something compelling and moving and beautiful from a fellow writer. It fertilizes my creativity, like plant food does for plants. From their words spring ideas and prose and setting and scenery. If you write, know that people are encouraged by your talent, your wisdom, your way with words.

It beats any other kind of addiction. I’ll admit it– I really like praise. I don’t mind critique and opinion, but praise is addicting. “Oh my goodness, this is so great! I just love it!” feels good. Cannot deny that. As part of a fanfiction community, fanfic writers in particular (because we submit our stories for public opinion, using software that provides for feedback) have huge opportunities everyday to encourage one another, stroke egos, and feed the Praise Addiction with positive feedback. I always say that I don’t write for reviews or feedback or comments. Much of what I write doesn’t get a huge response. I have an entire archive of stuff that has no response… but when I get it? Wow, what a feeling. Unless they’re faking it. In which… I’d just rather not know. Don’t fake the funk but if you’re faking it, keep doing it well.

To prove to myself that I can do it. For no other reason than to sit back after I type the last sentence, the last word, the last bit of punctuation and feel like I did something I can be proud of. I start a lot of stories. A lot of drabbles and ficlets and one-shots and a lot of them go nowhere. When I finish one? I have proven to myself (again) that I can do it. And then I should keep doing it.

I should keep writing.

Why do you write? What are your reasons to keep going?

Snippet Sunday 8/14: In-depth Evaluation

No rhyme or reason to today’s snippet. I picked a random chapter from a random story, copied and pasted whatever caught my eye. I’m kind of vain about this story though. I really enjoyed letting loose and writing this one. One of my faves.

From Same Time Next Week, enjoy today’s Snip!

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