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	<title>Melinda Jones ~ The Sweet Escape &#187; Protagonize</title>
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		<title>Up &amp; At &#8216;em &#8230;</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[Update 2: Geez. What&#8217;s a person have to do to find a critique group full of writers (good ones) that are adults? And, sorry, aren&#8217;t from the UK? The terminology and style are so different&#8230; I can&#8217;t write like a &#8230; <a href="http://www.thesweetescape.net/blog/2010/writers-write/up-at-em/">Continue reading <span class="meta-nav">&#8594;</span></a>]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Update 2: Geez. What&#8217;s a person have to do to find a critique group full of writers (good ones) that are adults? And, sorry, aren&#8217;t from the UK? The terminology and style are so different&#8230; I can&#8217;t write like a Brit and they can&#8217;t write like Americans.</p>
<p>I joined My Writer&#8217;s Circle, finally. Read a couple of great pieces, offered some opinions and such. Overall, though I find a lot of older US writers who write fantasy, or young writers looking for help with speeches and English assignments, and writers from the U.K. *shoulders sag*  Believe me, I&#8217;m kind of annoying myself, with this. I told Green Eyes that when I ask someone to read something, and they don&#8217;t have anything to say, it ticks me off. But if they pick it apart, that hurts my feelings. I&#8217;m not sure, exactly, what I want. Maybe I should try to define that, first.</p>
<p>In the meantime I have successfully not made any more edits to Try To Say No. I think that&#8217;s a good sign.  Maybe I should upload it so  people can read it and offer thoughts?</p>
<p>Heard about a <a href="http://www.shortstorycompetition.com/" target="_blank">new writing contest</a>. Due April 1. HMMMMM. It seems to me that the winner&#8217;s of these contests have a distinct style. The subject matter is fantasty, futuristic, or historical. I don&#8217;t feel like I have skillz in those areas.</p>
<p>Well.</p>
<p>We&#8217;ll see&#8230;</p>
<p>**</p>
<p>Have been up since 6ish. First thing I did was open the laptop and take a fresh look at &#8216;Try To Say No&#8217;. I got some good feedback overnight, over some parts that were niggling at me but I didn&#8217;t know WHAT was exactly wrong. Thanks to that person that went beyond a cursory glance and actually read the piece and had something to say besides &#8216;it&#8217;s good, now read mine&#8217;. Not sure I will hang out there, much. I know I am much more interested in hearing what people have to say about my piece than sorting through every 17 year old&#8217;s 122 lines of poetry. I can&#8217;t imagine how many people there want to read other people&#8217;s stuff, either. We shall see. I&#8217;ll do my best to return the favor when I can.</p>
<p>I think I am coming much, much closer to  final draft. Taking a long, overnight break did a great deal of good, as did that critique. I do need to come to a point, eventually, where I decide I am done and call it good and finished and move on to something new. Not sure I&#8217;ve reached that point, yet.</p>
<p>Hopefully more writing today and a trip to Barnes &amp; Noble this afternoon. Looking forward to that. Books!</p>
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