Snip! It’s Sunday! 11/20

I haven’t done this for awhile, but since I am writing a new story over at the archive, I decided to post a snippet for today. The new story is called Schizophrenic. It uncurls a tale of interruption of the idyllic life of a former popstar who still has one ultra devoted fan. Not only is she obsessive, but she is mentally ill and believes that the pop star is talking to her through his music.

This scene is from Chapter 1. My main characters have just returned from their anniversary dinner to find something not quite right about the house. They’re in the car, waiting for the police to arrive and check it out.  This story is in progress over at the NF Archive.

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Writing Lessons from Fan Fiction #4: On Characterization

This week, I’ve been posting the lessons I’ve learned about writing from Fan Fiction. Not only has it been great practice but it has taught me some things about writing.

1: Take your writing seriously. Even if it’s for fun. Just because it’s fan fiction doesn’t mean it isn’t real writing.

2: Take the good with the bad, and invent a strategy that helps you deal with either situation- fawning fans or booing boors.

3: Stay on task. Figure out what method works for you. Plan it, schedule it, do it!

Today I want to talk about characters, because this, besides the “world” is probably the crux of most fan fiction.

Lesson #4: How to Establish and Maintain Consistent Characterization

I don’t honestly read much fanfiction outside of my own fandom. On occasion I have read some Criminal Minds fan fiction, so let’s use this as an example. If you’re a fan of the show, you know the characters are well-defined. My friends and I talk about Hotch, Reid, Morgan, and Garcia as if they are actual people and not roles for actors. Actors “get into the skin” of the character they portray and to us, the viewing public, they almost ARE those characters. When you take Derek Morgan, for example, and write him into a fictional situation borne of your mind, readers want him to resemble Derek Morgan. There are very few circumstances in which it would be okay to change a well-known character’s personality without a very good, plot driven reason.

Viewers, readers and fans fall for (and in love with) personalities, characteristics, traits and mannerisms. Vocabulary, diction, dialect, even how s/he might shake the hair out of their eyes or stretch their muscles after long, hard day are things our minds subconsciously pick up. When  writers “borrow” these characters, it is of utmost importance to stay true to these minute details.

How do I “Stay In Character”?

Study. Study study study. Read other fan fics. Watch video, read interviews. Any piece of material that you can get your hands on that will aid you, use it. For me, audio and video are the best. On occasion, photos help as well, especially if I have to include a description or I have to describe a particular stylistic era in their career.

The other side of this characterization is a supporting cast. Unless your piece is a monologue, you will have other characters that weave into and out of the pages of your story. Some will be recognizable like your borrowed character. Some will be original. They still must be believable. If you write a love interest (for Derek, for example), you want to write a woman that he would be attracted to, that you could “see” him going for. He seems to like pretty ladies with long hair who have a little sass. If, in your story, he falls for the complete opposite, this will be a hard sell for readers, especially if their investment is in Derek and not your original character.

As an aside, never EVER go all Mary Sue (characterized as a female lead who resembles the author in many ways, except she is perfect and does no wrong). Make your characters, especially your female leads strong and well-rounded. They have lives and back stories and plot points all on their own. At some point, their story arc crosses your main character’s, and that’s where the story gets interesting. Give them faults. Give them conflict. Put some chinks and weaknesses in the armor– this makes your character entirely more interesting. A perfect female lead who does not bring spark to the table is just boring.

No matter what you choose to write, believability is tantamount. I have to be able to buy what you’re selling. My belief has to be suspended in order to get lost in your words. I wrote a story about a pop star who falls in love with a groupie. Believable and predictable on the surface, but my main character is the laid back type… he’s not really going to work hard to keep her, to jump through hoops to make her happy. I had to give her something that he would hook onto, something they had in common that would get his attention, and because she had his attention, he would be more invested in carrying on a relationship with her, even though she was pretty darned flawed. I mean, REALLY. She had ISSUES.

Chinks in the armor. Conflict. An original character that is a match for my main character and someone my reader could sink their teeth into.

 Bottom Line: If you don’t “Buy It”, your readers won’t, either.

What I Learned About Writing From Writing Fan-fiction- Lesson #1

I recently read a blog post where an author wrote about his disdain for fiction (I’m not going to link the post because I don’t want any trouble, man).  He really, really dislikes it, and not just because some of it is really, really bad. Granted, he meant fan created stories based on novels like like Harry Potter, Twilight, etc. His perspective is understandable, given that some authors don’t want their work fanfic’d (I heard, for example, that a particular romance author will string you up by your fingernails and I don’t know about you but a) I’d never fanfic one of their novels and b) I need my fingernails to type!). If I was a published author, I wouldn’t want a “bad”writer messing with my characters, either.

He said (paraphrasing) that it was lazy and and unimaginative to borrow a world and put those characters in different situations than the author intended– and frankly that is why I never did a REMIX, where people take your stories and do exactly that: put your characters in different situations, with your permission, even changing the story line and outcome. If I wanted it written that way, I would have done that!

So how can I feel that way about my stories but still write fan fiction?  Well, for one there is a difference between ficcing a fantasy story in which the author has worked hard to create an alternate universe, such as Harry Potter or Lord of the Rings, etc and RPF.  RPF (or Real Person Fiction) borrows the public image of a person and writes them in fictional situations.

I’m trying to make that sound the least creeptastic as possible. Trust me, it was hard.

Since the persona is public and writers try very hard to maintain the “us & them” (i.e. there are some things we just don’t touch) wall, there really isn’t a ‘world’ to borrow, except the one they ‘work’ in. If they’re an actor, a singer, or have some other public job, that tends to carry over into stories because that is what is familiar to fans.

I read his post and nodded along and sure, I understand his point. He also admitted to never writing any fan fiction and except for a few bad apples, never really explored the fan fic world. Of course, down here in the amatuer ranks, there are good writers and there are “Uhmmm,  I don’t understand the point of the story, and have you ever heard of punctuation” writers.  I remember when I discovered fiction based on my favorite member of a music group and  feeling like it was pretty creepy and I refused to even entertain the notion. Then I wanted to see if I could do it. Three years later,  I am still writing.

Why?  Because it taught me some things about writing.

That post about an author’s hate dislike of fan fiction brought to mind the bad fic I’ve read and how I’ve tried to avoid being that writer that people avoid. It also spawned an idea  –Writing Lessons Taught by Fan Fiction.

A simple Google search will net you authors who got their start in fan fiction. It’s great practice to hone your skills, to cut your teeth on something you’re really interested in. The more you write, the more you learn about writing, and I’ve learned a lot. I’ve asked a few of my fellow writers at various story archives to weigh in on this topic with any lessons they’ve learned along the way. At the end of the week I’ll compile and post them as, hopefully, a long list of things that writers can look forward to learning from writing fan fiction.

Lesson #1: Fan Fiction is real writing.

We create original characters, backstory, an effective arc, plot, setting, dialogue… the whole bit. There is no script to mimic.   Typically, stories carry a character in name and a few recognizable characteristics. The rest is invented and whether the story is 1,000, 10,000 or 100,000 words, it is a new creation. Words appear on paper and from beginning to end, tell a story. That’s writing.

And that isn’t fake.

Fan Fic writers don’t write for publication or money or notoriety. We’re not trying to sell a book or hook an agent or find out how to get published. We write purely for fun, for recognition, and to be part of a community. And, if you have talent and can weave a great story, you can achieve a small following of people who read and respect your work and offer honest feedback and criticism. It’s a built-in critique group and, over time, this singular focus on writing alone  is what builds better writers.

Stay tuned this week for more lessons from Fan Fiction’s Knee. If you are or know a Fan fic writer, I hope you’ll pass along this week’s posts!

Are you or have you ever written Fan Fiction? What are some of the things you learned from writing it? 

#SnippetSunday- 8/7: Rescue Me (Part Duh)

I have no idea why I named it that, except the decision that my female MC, Gabby, needs to make is such a no brainer. Duh.

Here’s a snippet from that story, which will be posted in its entirety at the fanfiction archive and my personal archive.

“Your mom, she’s okay?”

“More than okay. It was just me and her for a long time, you know? She put herself through nursing school, put me through school. She made it work.”

“She must have given you your spunk.”

“If that’s what you want to call it, yeah. I’m proud of her. When I graduated, she went back for another degree. And then she married one of her doctors, so…” Gabby stopped to laugh.

A knowing smile broke across his face. He nodded. “So she’s doing just fine, huh?”

“Just fine,” she said, nodding back.

“So your… stepdad? Is he a good guy?”

“He’s the best thing to ever happen to her. He’s why she’s always after me to date and meet new guys. She wants me to be as happy as she is.” Gabby snorted a laugh. Like she could subscribe to the fairytale her mother tried to plant in her head.

“You sound like you don’t think that’s possible. People find love everywhere. Anywhere. You never know.”

Even on the Sunset Strip. Wait. What? 

Et Voila. I hope you’ll read the rest later on today!

Snip, snip! It’s Snippet Sunday!

I guess I’m staying with that title for now. I decided, since I am writing the sequel to this story right now, to post a snippet of it today. Mostly since I haven’t really gotten that far on the sequel and I think I will be able to post a snip from that one next week.

This is from Rescue Me, Originally posted August 8, 2010:

He gave her a devilish half grin and rolled to his side. “So there’s a part in that movie, which we‘re probably missing right now, where Edward climbs the trellis outside Vivian’s place, like the Prince in her story. And when he gets to the Princess, he asks her, what happens after he climbs the tower and rescues her?”

“She rescues him right back.”

He smiled, stroking her cheek with the tips of his fingers. “I didn’t want to be here by myself, so I went out last night. I was in a room full of people but I was alone, and I was coming back to a house where I’d be alone.  I probably wouldn’t have made it home, but then you came and rescued me. And I know you’re leaving town and all, but– ”

Barely audible, Gabby said, “You could rescue me right back.”

He laughed aloud, scooting closer to her. “That’s exactly what I was thinking I would do.”

You can find the entire story posted at my archive here or at the NF archive here.

Snippet Sunday: Rescue Me II

So, I mentioned a few days ago that I would no longer be participating in the official Six Sentence Sunday. I also mentioned that I would continue to post snippets and teasers, so I’m continuing the Sunday posts, just not for the #SixSunday Crew.

I need a new name for this feature. Calling it Snippet Sunday for now. Suggestions?

Anywhoozle, on to my sentences for today! They’re from the project I’m currently working on for Awesome August, a summer writing challenge at the NF archive. It is a sequel to the story I wrote last year, a cute little ditty that’s reminiscent of Pretty Woman. Enjoy, and please check out last year’s story and be sure to keep your eyes peeled for the new one! I haven’t decided what day I’ll post it but I’ll let you know when it’s up!

(BTW, Loyal Readers, YES I am quite evil, teasing you all like this, and YES I do plan to tease you with snippets until I post the entire story. It’s just the way I am!)

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Six Sentence Sunday 7/17: Nowhere Man

It’s another Six Sentence Sunday, where writers post six– yes, only six– sentences to showcase their work.

Today’s sentences come, by request of a very faithful reader,  from my most recent finished story entitled Nowhere Man, about a man who is homeless and is befriended by a woman who seems to have been watching over him for quite some time. Part angel, part rebel, this woman (Nix) takes her new friend on an outing. On this outing, he meets her gaggle of friends, some rough-and-tumble guys from the “South Side”. One friend in particular doesn’t take too kindly to the new guy sniffing around his friend.

Colin, the bear of a man that had greeted Phee first, exploded into the bathroom and before JC realized it, he was pinned to the wall by Colin’s enormous hand and his feet dangled a good half inch off of the floor. He could breathe—barely—but his heart thumped out of his chest and he was starting to panic.

“You fuckin’ around with Nix?” A snarl replaced his playful demeanor from earlier in the day, accompanied by dark, beady eyes and bushy eyebrows knit together in fury. “Answer me, fucker!”

Eyes desperately large and earnestly round, JC shook his head and clawed at Colin’s hand, squealing, “N-N-No, swear to God, I’m not!”

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Fellow Writer’s Blog Hop: Writer’s Flashback (in which I facepalm)

This month the Fellow Writer’s Blog Hop topic is Writer’s Flashback. To take a look at something written maybe several months to years ago and share how our writing has evolved since then.

Oh. Gawd.

I have been writing since I was a teenager, but I don’t have any of that material. I took a long, LONG hiatus from writing and only picked it back up a few years ago in the form of Fanfiction. *cough* NSYNC fanfiction*cough*

The first story that I wrote was really, really bad. It was never posted anywhere and I abandoned it pretty early on. It was reincarnated as my longest. story. evar and I ended up finishing it in January of this year. The first story that I posted at the archive, however, was a ditty called Let’s Start Over“, about a spoiled, petulant brat of a popstar who is forced to work with one of the “Kings of BubbleGum Pop”. Despite her innate need and want to dislike him, his easy going nature and ability to prove that he was more than a soft pop song writer wins her over.  Continue reading

Six Sentence Sunday: Haunted By A Song

Today’s sentences come from a shorter story  that I wrote for the fiction archive. I recently re-read some of my work to get back into some kind of writing groove. I actually really love this story– not to toot my own horn but it came out really well, in my opinion. I was a little surprised that it didn’t get much of a reception, but oh well. At least I liked it? The story is titled Haunted By a Song and it is about a man who has a recurring dream about a life that is contrary to the perfect, Rockwellian-like one he is living. Turns out that the dream is about a song that he must write and a dream that he must live out. In this scene, Josh has come into contact with a man who says he wants to take Josh– and the song– to New York and make him a star.  But is Josh ready to start living the dream?

“So all he said was that he wanted to make you a star, and then walked away?” Celeste pulled the covers back on the bed and slid between the sheets, then laid down to watch her husband pace the length of the room, staring at the card in his hand as he’d been doing for the last 45 minutes, at least.

“That’s all he said, and gave me the card and said to call him if I was interested. I’ve never even heard of this guy–he could be anybody. I mean… I just… what do I do?”

“Well, first you get naked and then you get in the bed, and then we talk. Come on, move it.”

A Thanks and Writing Update Post

First of all, THANKS to all of the people who commented on my Sunday Six post! I am going to make it a point to get around and read the entries from yesterday.

I am not writing tonight because I finished my story! Yay. It ended up being a little over 40,000 words. It is posted at the Fiction archive and also at my archive here.

I’ve also updated my word count for March, since I don’t plan to do any more writing this week. I ended up at 105,742 words so far for the year. My goal is 350,000 for 2011, so uhm… I have a lot more writing to do.

I’ll be getting ready to fly to New York tomorrow and Wednesday! So excited! I hope I can make it to WORD in Brooklyn– I just really want to go there. Until then, I’ll be mentally prepping myself for my next adventure. I promised my writer friend that I wouldn’t write any more fan fiction until I wrote something original. SIGH. So I am going to spend April mapping things out and trying to start something new.  Original never comes as easily to me as fan fic does, but I have to get off the easy train. No one is going to publish my fan fiction.

#WiPWednesday 3.16 & other stuff

It’s Wednesday again!

Just  quick update on my WIP. I hammered at it some last week and spent a good amount of time pushing the story forward past an important point over the weekend. I sent it to a small group of people to check out and give some feedback and plan to work on it some this week.

I don’t know if it’s the time change or just general fatigue but I’ve been getting home around 5:30 or 6 and I just feel like passing out. Like a lot of writers, it is my “night job” or my hobby. I can’t write all day as I’m at work, so by the time I get home I’ve already had a full day. Then I try to read a little– it gets me in the writing mood, then I settle down to write by 7 or 8pm and I’m already yawning.

This happens at the beginning of the week, and maybe it’s beceause Monday and Tuesday are my hit-the-ground-running days. Wednesday- Friday tends to be less taxing, so I’m not as tired when I get home.

So  I said all that to say that I haven’t worked on my WiP since Monday, but I’m not feeling bad about it because I pounded out some words over the weekend. Last week I was at 18,500 or so words. As of right now I am sure I am over 27K. I wanted to keep this story short. I guess I am just incapable of that. Ha!

The other night on twitter, it must have been last weekend, I wrote about 6K words on a Sunday. Not a huge deal for me as I was on a roll and in the meat of the story. Someone responded that it was ‘amazing’. I added the caveat that I won’t likely keep all 6k, but I write them and count them. In editing, I cut a lot back, rewrite a lot, rephrase and prettify. What started at 6k might only end up 4k.

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