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DIYMFA: 9/16 Weekend Writing Prompt

 

For those unfamiliar with DIYMFA, it is a website that allows writers to use tools, exercises and experiences to design their own advanced writing program. The do-it-yourself approach allows each of us to flourish in our own ways and dive as deeply as we want (or need) to go to improve our writing and knowledge of the craft.

It’s our first Weekend Writing Prompt! The Starting Point:

Reading:
1) Do you read regularly? If so, how many books per year, on average?

Yes, I am an avid, voracious reader. This year my goal is to read 50 books or more.

2) What are your Top 3 preferred subjects or genres?

I’m a fiction reader- within that I like literary fiction, women’s fiction, some erotic romance  and historical fiction (set in the US).  I read some non fiction but not much- it has to be for a specific purpose. Right now I am reading memoirs of people with schizophrenia as research for a story I am writing.

3) List the last 5 books/magazines you’ve read.

*consults my GoodReads account* – Swallow the Ocean (biography, non fiction), The SisterHood of Blackberry Corner (adult fiction, women’s fiction, black author),  Surrender the Heart (christian fiction, historical fiction), The Accident (fiction, thriller) , The Whispering Room (fiction, mystery, thriller)

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Writing Wednesdays: Inspiration

Well, it’s another Wednesday, the hump that represents mid-week. By this point in the week I like to be knee deep in my weekly goals and challenges to myself. I have been reading and writing like a fool, so good going so far.  I’m hitting a bit of a hurdle in my current story but I am making an effort to overcome it. I’m also doing a lot of reading for research on the topic of Schizophrenia. The stories are just… larger than life, you know?

I’ve also been keeping up on the blogs. The theme among the blogosphere lately seems to be inspiration. How do you get it? What sort of thing brings you the most inspiration? What person/place/thing/idea sends you flying to your writing corner and makes you bang on your WIP or scribble in your notebook? I like talking about things that inspire me, so I’ll list some of mine here.

GOOD WRITING

The number one, numero uno, primero point of inspiration for me is excellent writing. I love getting lost in another writer’s words, whether it be a published book or an online story or a great blog post. Writers who share their craft with others help me feel like I, TOO, CAN BE A WRITER!

LIFE

Life imitates art and art imitates life and it’s all such a never ending cycle.  When people I know talk about situations they’ve dealt with, some of those stories stick with me. I tuck them away in my mental list of plot points and twists that I might want to use later. A witty conversation overheard in the elevator, or the way someone says something might get written down or emailed to myself as soon as I get to my desk. I take pieces of people and places and things and jobs and attitudes and store it all away in my head where an ever-growing monster builds and eventually must claw its way out, onto paper. Or computer screen.

ART

Of course art, because you know… LIFE! I rarely get inspiration from paintings, but photos can spawn a nice 3,000 word story about a rain storm. Or 1500 words about peppermints or a chapter in which my characters discuss Degas and whether or not he was perverted.

Music is probably my biggest inspiration, ever. Lyrics are like art, drawing such emotional scenes. So many songs are like soap operas set to rythm. I’ve written so many stories based off of song lyrics. I love an amazing lyricist, how they twist words and meaning and in 3.5 minutes, tell what can be a heartbreaking story. I love siphoning that emotion, that mood, the meaning behind the words and turning it into something that takes the reader on a journey. I’m writing a story right now based off of Alanis Morrisette’s Hands Clean. Her lyrics are amazng.

 

Your turn… tell me what inspires you? What makes you sit down and write?

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A different kind of writing: Join me for the Bert Show’s Big Thank You

I heard about this last year but didn’t participate. This year will be different.

 

Now is your chance to say thank you to our troops!  The Bert Show is collecting letters of thanks so every single soldier stationed or deployed outside the United States can receive a letter of gratitude on Thanksgiving Day.  We want to give our troops a “Big Thank You” with a little taste of home this Thanksgiving.

In 2007, Bert Show listeners successfully wrote 375,000 letters to troops all over the world!  This year, we need your help to express a BIG THANK YOU to 400,000+ U.S. soldiers.  With less than two months to mail these letters, we need you to start writing your letters now!

The Bert Show can only do this with your help.  Let’s pull together to make this project a success!  Get your class or school to write letters.  We want everyone in your church, civic group, sorority/fraternity, office, or neighborhood to write letters.  Give our troops that much deserved show of appreciation by writing a letter of thank you.

Thank you so much for giving our service men and women a little connection to home this Thanksgiving with The Bert Show’s Big Thank You.

Here are the specs you need to know when writing your letter:

LETTER FORMAT

  • Each letter should be heartfelt, handwritten, original, and free of any political statements.  The purpose of the letter is to express thanks to the military personnel currently deployed outside the United States.  We reserve the right to eliminate those messages that are political in nature and do not reflect a positive message in the spirit of Thanksgiving.  Those letters will be destroyed.
  • All letters must be on 8.5” x 11” paper or smaller.  Do not use glue, tape, staples, cardboard, glitter or otherwise attach anything to the paper.  Decorate using crayons, pencil, etc.  Use both sides if you like, but use one page per letter only.  Do not send cards or photographs.  Feel free to include your mailing and email address, and you may get a response.  Individual letters should not be sealed in envelopes
  • Do not send anything except letters.  We cannot accept donations of any kind, and they should not be included or attached to letters.

SUBMISSION GUIDELINES

  • Every individual letter is important, but for organizational purposes, please try to submit letters in bulk whenever possible.  Work with your school, church, civic group, sorority/fraternity, office, neighborhood, etc. and send all letters bundled as directed below.
  • For group submissions, letters should be bundled in groups of 50, 100, or 250 and held together with two rubber bands:  one wrapped lengthwise and the other width-wise.  This will help tremendously with sorting.  The top page in the bundle should indicate clearly how many letters are included.  Do not bundle letters unless they are in groups of 50, 100, or 250.  If you have a partial bundle of less than 50 letters, fasten them together with a paperclip.  The top page in the group should clearly indicate how many letters are included.  If you are submitting 10 or fewer letters, the letters can be folded to fit into a standard business-size envelope.

 

Mail your letters to:

The Bert Show’s Big Thank You

780 Johnson Ferry Road NE

5th Floor

Atlanta, GA 30342

I hope a few of my fellow writers will join me this year in providing a little cheer to our troops overseas! They deserve it and it will be one great big thing we do to support them!

Authors, writers, poets, bloggers: Will you join me in writing a letter and saying Thank You?

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Today’s Indie is… me! ‘Try To Say No’ is featured at IndieInk.Org!

It’s up, it’s up, it’s up! Yay!

I am the Featured Writer at IndieInk.org. Fantastical!

 

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Lessons Learned From Writing Fan Fiction #5: Research is King (of the Time Suck)

In my quest to make the leap from fan fiction to original fiction writing, I’ve been noting some lessons I have learned from writing fan fiction these last few years.  You’ll find Lessons #1-4 on the sidebar right… there —->

So we’ve come to Lesson 5 in my short list of the good stuff I have learned from being a fan fiction writer.

#5: Research is King (of the TimeSuck)

You know how it is. You sit down to write a story about… I don’t know. Harry Potter in Space. But you’ve never written about space. Nor have you ever written about Harry Potter. Let’s skip the part where this probably isn’t going to be a good story and note the steps taken. You’ve already figured out what’s supposed to happen in the story, who your characters will be, and where your story takes place (in space, DUH). The first thing you’ll need to know is what they call that thing that astronauts live in, and also how much oxygen is in there, and how big is one of those things, and how many people can you fit in a space ship, and how long would it take for a ship to travel from Hogwarts to Mars… and now it’s 5 hours later and you haven’t written a single word.

I’m BIG on research. HUGE on research. I want the details to be as exact as possible. In AIWD, my main character and his love interest are adopted. I have no idea what that feels like. Cue research. I sent them to Orlando, South Carolina, Baltimore, New York, Tennessee, New Orleans, Phoenix and Los Angeles and GREECE. I have only ever been to New York (but I went AFTER I wrote the story) and Los Angeles. Cue research. My male MC is a musician. He gets a guitar for Christmas. NOT ONE CLUE ABOUT GUITARS. Cue research. My female MC works in Marketing, something I know little about. RESEARCH.

When I am in the throes of a story, the #1 thing that can distract me is research. I will type something, want to be sure  about it, and look it up. I need to describe a hotel, a street corner, a house? Google what I imagine in my head, do an image search, and base my words off of that image. I did this a lot when I sent my characters to Greece. But I would find that, an hour later, I am still looking at pictures of Mykonos and Santorini and also do they speak english there and are there tours and what is the temperature in April and how does a person get from Point A to Point B and how long is the ferry ride and does that fit in my story?

Is research important? YES.

Can it suck your time something fierce? YES.

Is it a great mode of procrastination? YUP.

Tips/Lessons Learned:

1.  Write out my questions beforehand.

1a. Set aside specific time for research that is NOT my writing time. I know what’s coming ahead in each chapter and the details I am going to need to include. I set up some research time and go at it. GO HARD or GO HOME! And then once the majority of my questions are answered and I have my photos and websites bookmarked and information I need, I can start writing.

2. While writing, if something comes up… and it sounds hard to do and it IS..   I skip it. I leave a note to myself to look it up at my next research session. I am an obsessive editor, so likely when I pass it again a day or so later, I will fill in the blanks. This gets easier as time goes on and I lose my ‘it needs to be perfect the first time I write it or it’s CRAP’‘ mentality.

3. Get a good gauge for what is too much information and what is not enough.  When I read a book and my eye starts to wander at the 3/4ths of a page description of a garden, I become more attuned to that in my own writing. I have gone from long drawn out imagery of a hotel room to a scant sentence and a half. And a good tip I have learned is that the scenery isn’t really important unless it’s part of the action. The chair sitting cockeyed doesn’t matter, unless the chair is NEVER cockeyed or your MC trips over it on his way to X location. Using words, imagery, description, just to use them is filler, IMO.

Tighten, lighten, less is more.  

 

How are your research skills? How do you manage your research time? Is it a suck or do you have it down pat? Share your tips in the comments below! 

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HOLY SPUMONI (and other exclamatory utterings)! I’m going to be featured at Indie Ink!

Holy wow. Well. I just got some very good news, Blog People. I’ve been very shy about submitting work, but I finally got up the nerve to submit to Story Fix. I did not die or explode. This is good news.

At the same time, I must have sent the piece to Indie Ink.  IndieInk.org is an online writer and artist collective. It’s a great place to shake off the extra and just read some writing and look at some art.  I got notification this morning that my piece Try to Say No will be featured at Indie Ink. THIS IS EXCITING, OMG. It should be up first thing in the morning at Indieink.org!  I will of course post tomorrow and send everyone to the live link. YAY!

I have to admit, I’ve had a bit of the jealousies lately. I see so many people who haven’t been “working on their writing” getting writing jobs. It’s really been sticking in my craw, lately. But it’s my own fault, because I don’t submit my work or writing samples to even see if I could write for an online magazine or sell my stories.

Things like this are so, so encouraging to me. I will definitely be writing more and submitting more!

And also, I will get to put this fantastic badge on my blog!

So YAY! \o/

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Snippet Sunday 9/4: The Nature Show. The Rain Dance

The image of rain has been rolling around in my head for quite a while. I was trying to figure out if it was supposed to be metaphoric or symbolic, but it just wasn’t coming to me. I guess I was trying too hard, because last night I cued up Youtube and listened to the sound of rain (my writing soundtrack lately) and started writing. Still not quite what I was going for, but it has been haunting me for a long time, so maybe now it’ll leave me alone!

Check it — The Nature Show, The Rain Dance:

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Writing Lessons from Fan Fiction #4: On Characterization

This week, I’ve been posting the lessons I’ve learned about writing from Fan Fiction. Not only has it been great practice but it has taught me some things about writing.

1: Take your writing seriously. Even if it’s for fun. Just because it’s fan fiction doesn’t mean it isn’t real writing.

2: Take the good with the bad, and invent a strategy that helps you deal with either situation- fawning fans or booing boors.

3: Stay on task. Figure out what method works for you. Plan it, schedule it, do it!

Today I want to talk about characters, because this, besides the “world” is probably the crux of most fan fiction.

Lesson #4: How to Establish and Maintain Consistent Characterization

I don’t honestly read much fanfiction outside of my own fandom. On occasion I have read some Criminal Minds fan fiction, so let’s use this as an example. If you’re a fan of the show, you know the characters are well-defined. My friends and I talk about Hotch, Reid, Morgan, and Garcia as if they are actual people and not roles for actors. Actors “get into the skin” of the character they portray and to us, the viewing public, they almost ARE those characters. When you take Derek Morgan, for example, and write him into a fictional situation borne of your mind, readers want him to resemble Derek Morgan. There are very few circumstances in which it would be okay to change a well-known character’s personality without a very good, plot driven reason.

Viewers, readers and fans fall for (and in love with) personalities, characteristics, traits and mannerisms. Vocabulary, diction, dialect, even how s/he might shake the hair out of their eyes or stretch their muscles after long, hard day are things our minds subconsciously pick up. When  writers “borrow” these characters, it is of utmost importance to stay true to these minute details.

How do I “Stay In Character”?

Study. Study study study. Read other fan fics. Watch video, read interviews. Any piece of material that you can get your hands on that will aid you, use it. For me, audio and video are the best. On occasion, photos help as well, especially if I have to include a description or I have to describe a particular stylistic era in their career.

The other side of this characterization is a supporting cast. Unless your piece is a monologue, you will have other characters that weave into and out of the pages of your story. Some will be recognizable like your borrowed character. Some will be original. They still must be believable. If you write a love interest (for Derek, for example), you want to write a woman that he would be attracted to, that you could “see” him going for. He seems to like pretty ladies with long hair who have a little sass. If, in your story, he falls for the complete opposite, this will be a hard sell for readers, especially if their investment is in Derek and not your original character.

As an aside, never EVER go all Mary Sue (characterized as a female lead who resembles the author in many ways, except she is perfect and does no wrong). Make your characters, especially your female leads strong and well-rounded. They have lives and back stories and plot points all on their own. At some point, their story arc crosses your main character’s, and that’s where the story gets interesting. Give them faults. Give them conflict. Put some chinks and weaknesses in the armor– this makes your character entirely more interesting. A perfect female lead who does not bring spark to the table is just boring.

No matter what you choose to write, believability is tantamount. I have to be able to buy what you’re selling. My belief has to be suspended in order to get lost in your words. I wrote a story about a pop star who falls in love with a groupie. Believable and predictable on the surface, but my main character is the laid back type… he’s not really going to work hard to keep her, to jump through hoops to make her happy. I had to give her something that he would hook onto, something they had in common that would get his attention, and because she had his attention, he would be more invested in carrying on a relationship with her, even though she was pretty darned flawed. I mean, REALLY. She had ISSUES.

Chinks in the armor. Conflict. An original character that is a match for my main character and someone my reader could sink their teeth into.

 Bottom Line: If you don’t “Buy It”, your readers won’t, either.

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Writing Lessons From Writing Fan Fiction #3: Staying on Task

Welcome back friends! I’ve been posting this week about the lessons I’ve learned about writing from writing Fan Fiction. Not only has it been great practice but it has taught me some things about writing. In review:

Lesson 1: You’re writing. Believe it. You MUST believe in and treat your work like it is real writing, because it is upon this work that you will improve. One cannot get better at writing without writing– you can read all the writing books you want to read, but unless you put it into practice and take it seriously, improvement will be hard to come by.

Lesson 2: Along with the good (reviews) comes the bad (reviews). Learn how to deal with them both! Don’t engage in criticism that doesn’t help you improve your work, and don’t make readers who love your work feel stupid for loving it. Remove the ‘this old thing’ response and say thank you!

Today we’ll talk about Lesson 3:

How to Stay On Task

Quite often in Fan Fiction, stories are posted as serials, meaning a writer might post a chapter or two, and build on the story as time goes on. Weekly or monthly, bi weekly, or as the chapters/sections come forth, the updates get posted. This builds a following and, if you do it right, keeps your readers on the tip of their toes waiting to find out what happens next.

There is nothing so disheartening as getting involved in a story and finding it unfinished, and that the author hasn’t updated their story in weeks. Or months. There are a few stories that I longingly stroke and nuzzle, hoping the writer will come back and satisfy my need to see the story line end. Sometimes a writer just ‘loses’ the story. Sometimes the writer never had the story in the first place. I see lots of ‘idea starts’ that never end up in completed stories, either because the writer has spread him/herself thin over so many pieces or because the writer was unable to stay on task.

The importance of keeping yourself on task is not  only necessary if you update in real time and want to keep your audience engaged. It also transfers to any writing project that you have underway, including original fiction and blogging. However you plan your stories (build on a concept and then write, outline the entire story, or just sit down and write) or your posts, it is helpful to stay a few steps ahead of whatever point your readers have reached. If I don’t know ‘what happens after this‘, a chapter doesn’t get posted, because I don’t want to write myself into a corner that I can’t get out of.

If it helps to keep yourself on a schedule, do it! I used to plan for a few days, write Thursday, Friday and all day and Saturday, have the chapter Beta’d and then posted by Sunday night. Sometimes this schedule slipped, especially if I was having a hard time, but knowing that people were waiting to read what happened is amazing motivation. This can apply to blogging as well. If it helps to build a schedule, build and establish one. If you want to post about certain things on certain days and it keeps you motivated, do it. Whatever works to keep you on task is what you need to do.

Do you have trouble staying on task, blogging on a schedule, providing timely updates? How do you manage your writing schedule?

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Writing Lessons from Fanfiction #2: How to Take the Good With the Bad

Yesterday I introduced this week’s topic, “What I’ve Learned About Writing from Writing Fan Fiction”, with the first lesson that anyone with a talent for writing will have to eventually convince themselves:  Fan Fiction writing is real writing.  While we don’t produce material that can be bought and sold, it is writing all the same. Anyone who’s writing fan fiction should consider their pieces to be their novellas, their novels, their short stories and be as proud of them as if they were being bound and printed. Today’s Lesson can be a hard pill to swallow.

Lesson #2: How to Take Your Lumps, and I’m not talking about the Lady kind.

They say we are our own worst critic, and that adage applies to every writer I know. The pages of this blog are full of whining and moaning about my writing not being as good/deep/prolific/magical/life changing as I’d like it to be. Once I’ve edited a piece to the nth degree, there is nothing so nerve-wracking as putting it up for public consumption and hoping that people don’t hate it.

What If They Hate It?

I always try to measure negative reviews against positive but the lone dissenting opinion can weigh heavily, especially if you don’t really get a reason as to why they don’t like your latest work. If readers hate your work and are so bold as to tell you so, what do you do?

I’ve read post after post about what to do about negative reviews. The answer is NOT to fly off the handle and get into a comment war. My personal rule is that a negative review has to have merit. This sucks and so do you doesn’t tell me much.  If they don’t expound upon why they think it (or I) sucks, I delete it. Criticism should be constructive, otherwise it’s simply childish meanness that I have no use for. Help me get better or shut it.

Or go into further detail about the suckage… exactly what part inhales wind?

What If They Like It?

But what if they don’t hate it? What if they ooh and aaah and swoon and you sit back and *squint* your eyes and say ‘Really? Because… I mean, it’s totally weak from here to here and I obviously flubbed this and that and I can’t believe you actually like the ending…’

Well. Don’t do that. A few lives ago, for a very short time I was a Personal Assistant for a fledgling Christian Music group. And yes, even Christian groups have groupies. One of the first thing that group members are taught is to not downplay themselves in front of fans. When fans fawn, don’t insist that you’re not like, totally awesome and you don’t like, totally rock. Say thank you. Smile. Express your appreciation. Sign whatever they want you to sign. Don’t make them feel stupid for thinking you’re great.

I think this is a lesson that any artist or writer could take to heart. It’s tough when we’re so supercritical of ourselves. And we want to stay humble– no one wants to be the pompous ass who thinks s/he is the greatest in the world. Trust me– if you were a pompous ass, it would have become apparent long before you wrote a great story/book/ chapter.

Bottom Line: Try to take something from everything, the good AND the bad. You never know when ‘this sucks because…’ might help you in the future.

Do you have a hard time accepting praise or criticism? How do/did you battle it?

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What I Learned About Writing From Writing Fan-fiction- Lesson #1

I recently read a blog post where an author wrote about his disdain for fiction (I’m not going to link the post because I don’t want any trouble, man).  He really, really dislikes it, and not just because some of it is really, really bad. Granted, he meant fan created stories based on novels like like Harry Potter, Twilight, etc. His perspective is understandable, given that some authors don’t want their work fanfic’d (I heard, for example, that a particular romance author will string you up by your fingernails and I don’t know about you but a) I’d never fanfic one of their novels and b) I need my fingernails to type!). If I was a published author, I wouldn’t want a “bad”writer messing with my characters, either.

He said (paraphrasing) that it was lazy and and unimaginative to borrow a world and put those characters in different situations than the author intended– and frankly that is why I never did a REMIX, where people take your stories and do exactly that: put your characters in different situations, with your permission, even changing the story line and outcome. If I wanted it written that way, I would have done that!

So how can I feel that way about my stories but still write fan fiction?  Well, for one there is a difference between ficcing a fantasy story in which the author has worked hard to create an alternate universe, such as Harry Potter or Lord of the Rings, etc and RPF.  RPF (or Real Person Fiction) borrows the public image of a person and writes them in fictional situations.

I’m trying to make that sound the least creeptastic as possible. Trust me, it was hard.

Since the persona is public and writers try very hard to maintain the “us & them” (i.e. there are some things we just don’t touch) wall, there really isn’t a ‘world’ to borrow, except the one they ‘work’ in. If they’re an actor, a singer, or have some other public job, that tends to carry over into stories because that is what is familiar to fans.

I read his post and nodded along and sure, I understand his point. He also admitted to never writing any fan fiction and except for a few bad apples, never really explored the fan fic world. Of course, down here in the amatuer ranks, there are good writers and there are “Uhmmm,  I don’t understand the point of the story, and have you ever heard of punctuation” writers.  I remember when I discovered fiction based on my favorite member of a music group and  feeling like it was pretty creepy and I refused to even entertain the notion. Then I wanted to see if I could do it. Three years later,  I am still writing.

Why?  Because it taught me some things about writing.

That post about an author’s hate dislike of fan fiction brought to mind the bad fic I’ve read and how I’ve tried to avoid being that writer that people avoid. It also spawned an idea  –Writing Lessons Taught by Fan Fiction.

A simple Google search will net you authors who got their start in fan fiction. It’s great practice to hone your skills, to cut your teeth on something you’re really interested in. The more you write, the more you learn about writing, and I’ve learned a lot. I’ve asked a few of my fellow writers at various story archives to weigh in on this topic with any lessons they’ve learned along the way. At the end of the week I’ll compile and post them as, hopefully, a long list of things that writers can look forward to learning from writing fan fiction.

Lesson #1: Fan Fiction is real writing.

We create original characters, backstory, an effective arc, plot, setting, dialogue… the whole bit. There is no script to mimic.   Typically, stories carry a character in name and a few recognizable characteristics. The rest is invented and whether the story is 1,000, 10,000 or 100,000 words, it is a new creation. Words appear on paper and from beginning to end, tell a story. That’s writing.

And that isn’t fake.

Fan Fic writers don’t write for publication or money or notoriety. We’re not trying to sell a book or hook an agent or find out how to get published. We write purely for fun, for recognition, and to be part of a community. And, if you have talent and can weave a great story, you can achieve a small following of people who read and respect your work and offer honest feedback and criticism. It’s a built-in critique group and, over time, this singular focus on writing alone  is what builds better writers.

Stay tuned this week for more lessons from Fan Fiction’s Knee. If you are or know a Fan fic writer, I hope you’ll pass along this week’s posts!

Are you or have you ever written Fan Fiction? What are some of the things you learned from writing it? 

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