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My impatience is showing

So, I’m reading “Perfect” the 3rd in the Pretty Little Liars series. And it’s pretty good, for being written for an audience way younger than I. There are 8 books in this series and each book is jam packed with details that very slow unravel a helluva backstory.

I find, though, that while I’m interested in what’s happening… I just want to know how it ends. I’m just not sure my attention span can hang on for 8 books. I just want to know who A is and who killed Ali and what’s up with all the secrets? I’m not all that concerned about Emily’s budding lesbianism or Aria’s dad and his mistress or Hanna’s relationship with her dad or her best friend who has serious clinging issues. Not being able to answer the question that has been lingering since book ONE is making me anxious, for some reason. I normally read the end of a book first, and maybe this ‘not knowing’ is just a new thing but.. argh! *bites nails*

So… baby did a bad thing. I started looking for spoilers of each book. And I found MOST of what I’m looking for. And while I’m still kind of confused, I can relax. I know, I’m weird, but now I can read the rest of the books at my leisure and know what clues I’m looking for.

I also did a little bit of writing today. About 400 words into Ch 58. Doing a lot of research on Greece, since that’s what this chapter focuses on, their trip to Greece. Not only is there a lot of scenery to read about and try to make real, but there will be a couple of important conversations. I was hoping to be done in 60 chapters. We’ll see.

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Finished a book, finished a chapter

Made great progress on Chapter 57 this week. Finished and posted at the *NSYNC Fiction site… hopefully the feedback from the readers will be good. :)

I also finished Book 1 of the Pretty Little Liars series. It ended with a cliffhanger… good thing I have all 8 books! I started reading this on my lunch breaks, as something light and fun that I can read in 30-35 minutes at a time. I ended up finishing it this morning, cause I just needed to know what happened! Contemplating trying to read them all before the TV  series starts up again. Interesting story line… not ready to review yet but for a free download, it wasn’t bad!

I started Homespun Bride, but I already hate it. Going to dump it. I have too much on my lists to waste time on it.

I did a wordcount of all my stories just at NF… over 700,000 words. WOW. At the end of next year, considering I get all my GYWO words in, I’ll hit a million words. Wowee.

Maybe some day I’ll publish some.

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Room by Emma Donoghue [Review]

RoomRoom by Emma Donoghue

My rating: 4 of 5 stars

Just… wow. I read this book in one day… couldn’t stop reading it! It’s like sitting in the mind of a 5 yr old as his world changes.

Told in 5 distinct parts, the story opens when Jack turns 5. Ma (and the room the live in) is his world. All Jack has ever known is Room. And Door and TV and table and Ma. He knows nothing of the world outside of an 11×11 square shed, a virtual prison for his 26 yr old mother. All he has ever known is what is inside the square. Everything on TV is not real. It’s pretend. It’s Outside. And Outside doesn’t really exist.

All day, everyday, Jack and Ma go through their schedules and routines. There’s breakfast and cartoons and then book reading and Phys Ed. There’s naptime and playtime and lunch and dinner and bed time. There’s also the Scream Game, where they yell as loudly as they can into the skylight. Jack doesn’t know that Ma hopes someone will hear them. There’s the game Ma plays at night, with flashing the lights on, off, on, off. Jack doesn’t know that Ma hopes someone will see it. There’s the reason Jack sleeps in the wardrobe, because at night Old Nick comes and the bed squeaks and Ma doesn’t want Him to see Jack.

There comes a time when Ma and Jack have to gather all of their courage, all of their strength, be scared but brave and attempt an escape. To do it, they have to trick old Nick, the man that kidnapped Ma when she was 19 and had held her captive for seven long years, through a still birth and years of abuse, a broken arm, rotting teeth, and the birth of Jack.

There’s a period of time after the escape– because they do make a daring escape– that Jack has to learn that his world is more than Ma, and Room and Meltedy Spoon and Rug and Table and Eggshell Snake. He has grandparents, a cousin, an Uncle, friends… an entire world that he never knew existed, called Outside. Outside was no longer a story or a fairy tale, it was real. It was an “Unlying”.

I really enjoyed Room! It took awhile to get used to Jack’s language but once I got it down I found him endearing and laughed at how well Emma Donoghue captured children’s literal understanding of the world. I was impressed with how well Ma cared for her child, made sure he was happy and healthy and adjusted as well as one could be while living in a 12ft square cube.

I wish I could have got some perspective from his mother, but seeing the story unfold through his eyes makes it that much more poignant. It really illustrates the resilience of children and how rapidly they adjust to change. I like to think that in some ways Jack was Ma’s reason for living and was an inspiration for her when they could finally leave Room. I also found it interesting how when they went back to Room, how small and different it seemed, compared to Outside. I inwardly applauded Jack for choosing Outside.

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The Confession by John Grisham [Review]

The ConfessionThe Confession by John Grisham

My rating: 4 of 5 stars

An innocent man is days from execution. Only a guilty man can save him.

It’s been awhile since I read this book, but I wanted to make sure I got a review in on this one. I remarked to someone earlier today that I’d put this book in my list of most enjoyed of 2010. Grisham includes a high level of detail, specifically when he’s talking about the physical illness of his main character, Travis Boyette.

It seems that good old Travis just can’t seem to let an innocent young black football stud die for a crime that he says he committed. And while that’s all well and good, no one believes that Travis committed the crime. The local PD thinks they’ve got their man, and they’re about to execute him.

Enter Kansas minister Keith Schroeder, to whom Boyette makes his confession. Now it’s on his shoulders to see that Donte` Drumm doesn’t die for a crime that he didn’t commit. Grisham weaves a tale in which there is a concerted “beat-the-clock” effort which had me biting my nails and flipping pages with earnest.

I’m a diehard Grisham fan and have read just about everything that he’s written in the legal genre. While some have been weak, most have been entertaining. In my personal opinion, The Confession reads to me now like The Firm read to me way back when. Some call this book weak, and I just don’t agree. As much as a legal thriller can be suspenseful, this book held my attention with every word.

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Now Reading: The Confession, by John Grisham

FINALLY a new book by Grisham. I love his legal thrillers. His last book, the Associate, was fantastic. After a few ‘off’ novels, he seems to be the Grisham of old with his last and now this current novel. Can’t wait to dig in. I’m at about Ch. 3 or 4, I can’t tell cause I am reading with my Kindle app on my iPhone… my fave way to read!

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Update: Orange is the New Black and writing

Last night I finally finished Orange is the New Black,  by Piper Kerman. I don’t typically read non fiction but the subject matter really interested me after I saw her appearance on the Today show. I downloaded the book right away to my Kindle app and have been slowly reading it.

For some reason, prison stories really interest and mesmerize me. I’m always fascinated by the odd feeling of ‘home’ that inmates admit to after awhile and how innovative they can be in their efforts to make daily life bearable. There was no shortage of  such ingenuity in this book as Piper takes the reader through her journey as a drug smuggler, her return to a straight laced- life and then the day when the FBI showed up on her doorstep to arrest her for her part in a life she hadn’t lived in over ten years.

Piper is sent to Danbury Women’s prison, which seems like a hellhole but isn’t ‘really’ prison, according to the inmates. Navigating the experience with all of the knowledge of an infant child, Piper learns daily who to trust, who to make friends with, how to survive. By the book’s end, she had served 13 months- 345 days, approximately.

The book read more like a diary, which I enjoyed. No exposition or making up of things that weren’t happening from Piper’s point of view. Despite how long it took me to finish it, I did love the book.

On other fronts, I’m being taunted. Not really. But really.

Every month I get the Newsletter from Glimmer Train. And for a year I’ve been thinking I will write something to submit. And then I write something and think it’s stupid and I don’t submit it and it sits there. Or I dive back into my fanfiction and write so much of it that it’s hard to focus on regular fiction.

So I’ve decided. I’m going to take one of my recent stories, The Storm and try to get it critiqued by a few people to see if I can submit it before the end of the month for the Fiction Open. Stories just have to be 2,000 to 20,000 words long, be fiction, not be a novel excerpt and not be a children’s story. I think I can handle that. It’s the writing well enough to be recognized by a literary journal part that I don’t know about.

I’m not stopping there. I’ve had an idea for a nonfiction piece that’s been rolling around for a few weeks. I’d like to map it out some on paper to see how it flows. Maybe it’ll work and maybe it won’t. Won’t know until I try it.

I am determined to try.

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Reading and Writing and ‘Rithmetic

Does anyone remember that song? School days, school days, dear old golden rule days…. I am old. Wow.

it’s a loooonnnggg weekend, and coming up on the end of the month, which means a  GYWO word count, yay! I actually got back to some writing this month, which feels good. Getting away from needing a pat on the back for every little step and just… writing (even though I did send a very rough draft to a friend for reading because I am special like that. And she was bored. Sue me), so I’ll be adding more to that story before I go back and edit words out. I wrote them so I am counting them!

I also finished A Reliable Wife this morning. Erm. Interesting. It took me so long to finish this book I don’t even know if I can review it but I will try and post it up here. I might have bought a couple of books today…… okay I did buy a couple of books today. They seem to be oldies but goodies but I flipped through them at Target and they looked interesting. I got The Bell Jar by Sylvia Plath and Go Ask Alice, author anonymous.

Looking forward to reading them both!

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Got an itch I need to scratch…

I feel like I haven’t written anything new in a long time. Probably because it’s true. I’m not talking novel length. Something short. A writing exercise. Or something. I’ve still only got that one story published, but THANK YOU to that benefactor that sent me the hugelongawesome list of places to submit my work!

Now all I have to do is write something!

I’ve been following Courtney Reese for a couple of weeks now (uhm fellow Criminal Minds fan, HELLO match made in heaven)  and she posted a GINOURMOUS list of blogfests going on… basically where someone issues a challenge to write along a specific topic and then submit their entry. Fun, and it makes people write. I may join one. Or several.

For example, the new writer’s blog Critique_This_WIP has a FlirtFest going on, where the task is to write a flirt scene. How FUN. I don’t have a firm idea right now, but I’m sort of inspired by Pride & Prejudice (it’s about time to watch that movie again) and the scene between Darcy and Eizabeth Bennet, where they are dancing, though Darcy proclaims to not dance, and they’re having a particularly high brow yet very flirtatious exchange. They just don’t realize that they’re flirting.

I have completed a very loose outline of the remaining story in All I Wanna Do. I am encouraged by the fact that I know how it ends. I’m not writing into oblivion. I am trying to think of places where I could skip story– it just doesn’t seem to work. The end is very climactic and everything that’s been talked about in the story thus far is important to the emotion of the ending. I want to be lazy, but I also want the ending to make an impact. So I have to write. SIGH. And I cant just write ‘okay this happened and then that happened’ and have a bunch of lame flashbacks. Unfortunately. It’s not a novel but I like it to read like one. That means I take my time crafting the story. And that means I have to be inspired and motivated and ~feel~ like writing because when I don’t, I end up trashing it and then it’s a waste of time.

Normally, my reading inspires me to write…. it just hasn’t been. I’m smack in the middle of A Reliable Wife. It’s alright. It doesn’t inspire me much but I am trying to plow through it. I may be tempted to buy it on Kindle, just so I don’t have to drag the book with me everywhere I go and I can read it in those off moments I so often have.

Also, remember my search for an active writing community of people that aren’t from the UK? FOUND.  I stumbled onto the Writer’s Digest community. It’s totally active and awesome and there’s so much there that I haven’t had the chance to dig into it much but it is my next stop after I publish this entry!

Which I am doing NOW, because I am cold and I need some tea. And I need to get away from these donuts.

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New books! A Reliable Wife & The Girl She Used To Be

Last week I was craving the feel of an actual book in my hands. For more than a year, I’ve been reading books via the Kindle App on my iPod Touch. It’s a great way to carry my Reading and To Be Read libraries around with me. I find opportunities to read at the oddest times and the oddest places. It’s nice to not have to dig a book out of my purse. Sometimes though, I just want to hold a book in my hands. I love the smell of a new book, a spine that hasn’t been cracked, pages that almost feather and the printing dust that flies out of the crevices when you fan them.

I’ve been eying a few books at Indiebound and Amazon. I finally bit the bullet and picked up one I’d been wanting to read but hadn’t because of the reviews. I decided to let my own interests gauge what I read, and since A Reliable Wife is a historical novel and I like that sort of thing, I picked it up. It is a hefty 291 pages. I am nearly halfway through.

Goolrick spins an interesting yarn. His description of the yarn, however, goes on and on and on. One of the issues I have with so many writers is the overdose of imagery and detail. Perhaps it is my short span of attention, but I find myself skipping half a page here, a full page or two there, of just description. I’m one who believes that setting is another character in a story, and you must give readers an accurate representation of what’s happening around your characters, what’s happening in between your dialog. I made a note this morning, in my Goodreads status update that I felt this book could be half as long and just as good. The attention to detail is amazing and yet, to me, slightly overdone.

The story itself is riveting so far! Ralph Truitt is a man who has been rich for so long he hardly notices anymore, except that most of the town works for him in some fashion. He is a lonely man, not old but not spry. He’s not had a companion in more than 20 years and uh……………it shows. Goolrick writes about Truitt’s desires the way only a man can. I almost feel the man’s pain! He seems painfully self aware of what others have and he does not. He feels as if people pity him or laugh at him behind his back. Living alone in the desolate prairie, where the snow piles high every winter and traps people in their own homes, on their own land begins to drive people mad. Without a companion, Truitt would spend the rest of his days alone and surely go mad with the rest of them.

Catherine Land is the woman who response to Truitt’s advertisement for ‘A Reliable Wife’. A simple woman is all Truitt asks for. A simple woman is what he thinks he’s getting. Oh, but Ms Land has some tricks up her sleeves.  She presents herself as something she is not. She has a scheme, a plan in her mind that must be carried out. The first part is to marry Truitt. I’m to the point where the plan she has set in motion has met a snag. And now I’m wondering how this is going to work out.

Such an interesting read, though I can’t help but think I’d have been done by now, had I bought this book on Kindle. I’ve realized that I love to lie in bed and read, and with my beside lamp on the fritz and the overhead light a little too bright, the atmosphere in my bedroom is just not very conducive to reading. Or writing, for that matter.

In all, I’m enjoying the story, skipping massive amounts of excessive (for me) detail, and already trying to predict the end. Can’t wait to finish so I can give it a proper review!  Preview this book on Goodreads  [HERE]

The other book I picked up is The Girl She Used To Be, by David Cristofano. I haven’t even cracked it open yet, but it is the tale of a girl whose family was in the Witness Protection Program. She is found, by someone she used to know and, against her better judgement and advisement, dives all at once back into her old life. I’m a fan of crime drama and thrillers, and since Grisham and Lescroart don’t have anything new for me to read, we’ll see if this one fills the void momentarily.

It’s a lovely Saturday in Atlanta. A perfect day to take the books outside and soak up some sun!

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Build My World by Rebecca Miller [Review]

Build My World Build My World by Rebecca Abbott Miller


My rating: 4 of 5 stars
This is the first book I read by Rebecca Miller, though I have to admit I read it because she was a friend first. I had no idea she wrote until she plainly said, “I write.” And then I was curious. I love to read, so I read.

Perhaps it is the stigma of writers who self publish, but my expectations for this book were relatively low. I mainly wanted to read it because a friend wrote it. I ended up loving it and being impressed that someone could write a full novel that held my attention through the end, and then publish it. And then sell copies!

This story had me at page one. I love when I open a book and I instantly have questions that need to be answered. They eat at me like a gnawing hunger. Casey Russo had a past, a reason for being at the point in her in life in which she was excited but nervous about a new job and building a new life. And then we meet the members of the fictional band Quintessential, who are lovable and interesting, each in their own way. I find myself digging through each member, trying to differentiate them, one from another. I instantly know that it’s Michael that Casey will fall for, and then I am concerned, because we all know the reputation of musicians. It’s exciting, almost nail bitingly exciting to read the blossoming of the relationship between Casey and Michael, the trials and tribulations of their pasts colliding and how they adjust to each other, his expectations and her fears creating one big mess.

Rebecca often writes that many romances are predictable. Boy meets girl, girl and boy like each other, boy and girl fall in love and end up together. Once in awhile there is a twist, and boy and girl don’t end up together… even that is predictable. What makes the difference then, is how the story is told. Rebecca tells the story plainly, letting that path of the plot make its own way. This story has great pacing, realistic dialog, and an obvious chemistry not only between the members of the fictional band members but between her love interests.

I’m happy that I have this in eBook form, because I tend to read books over and over and over, until they fall apart in my hands. I’ve read this one twice already and as long as digital format upholds, it’ll be around for me to read again and again.

This is the first book in the Quintessential Series. The second is Save Me, whose review is coming. I am slowly rereading it. I am (not so patiently) awaiting Coming Home, the third in this series and the books that follow.

It’s a pleasure calling Rebecca a friend, a confidante, and an inspiration.

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Sugar, Bernice McFadden [Review]

Sugar Sugar by Bernice L. McFadden

My rating: 4 of 5 stars


Sugar starts with a bang and ends with a heartfelt gasp.

At the beginning of Bernice McFadden’s Sugar, we don’t meet Sugar. We meet Jude, so to speak. Jude is the ghost in the story, the crux of every emotional scene in the novel. Jude is the murdered child of Pearl, a woman who befriends her next door neighbor that happens to go by the name ‘Sugar’.

Sugar is what polite people call a woman of ill repute and what not-so-polite people call a whore or a prostitute, blowing into the town of Bigelow on the wind of a powerful storm. The people of Bigelow are simple and quiet, a little bit superstitious and a whole lot judgemental. It seems like Pearl is the only person that really see Sugar for who she is… perhaps because Pearl is about the most naive person in Bigelow.

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