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DIYMFA: Books on Writing, in which I confess…

by MJones

A brief note before I post: Day three of the 30 Day Writing challenge is up on my Tumblr! If you’re participating by blog or Tumblr please let me know so I can follow!

So, today we are discussing building a library on the craft of writing. And I have a confession to make: I buy writing books all the time but don’t read them. I have several books of writing exercises but don’t really make use of them. It hasn’t been a medium that has been effective for me… it’s that feeling of flipping through a book and realizing it’s in a language you can’t read. In fact, I become overwhelmed and quite stressed out after reading them because I feel like I have no idea how to apply what I’ve just read to something I’m currently writing.  I am much more of a writing blog reader than I am a writing book reader, though I do have a couple of writing books I like:

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The Rare Saturday Post- Reading, Writing, and Random Babbling

by MJones

*waves to BlogLand*

I have been a bit absent this week. Mostly because I didn’t have much to say and I’m not one to post just for posting’s sake. And, as Sierra Godfrey mentioned in a great post this week, readers don’t really care what your excuses are for not blogging; nor do they care for silly filler posts. I happen to completely agree, so I don’t do them.

It has been a busy month for me though. Over at the Fan Fiction archive, we have been running a month long challenge. Writers sign up for a specific day and on that day, they post a completed story of 1,000 words or more. Once it is posted, it’s my job as Challenge Master (I just made that name up for myself) to publicize the author and their story all day. Everyday. On top of also running a fansite for a music group, my life outside of writing/ reading is pretty active.

And then there’s that. I’ve not done a whole lot of writing, lately. I wrote two stories for the aforementioned challenge. Both got pretty small reactions, but that they got comments at all is great, I suppose. A friend and I were discussing this phenomenon a few weeks ago, where when I posted stories in the past, I got lots of comments and lately I get very few. I started to worry that I lost my touch, my mojo, my writing fu. We discovered, though, that readers seem to like the chase. They like waiting for an update and slowly allowing themselves to identifywith the characters. When I write a story, however, I finish it and then I post it, in case I want to change/clarify something later. I can’t go back and change something I have already posted. And then I dump it on the archive and people read it all in one sitting, in one fell swoop and don’t feel as close to the characters as they would if I had spaced it out.

What it all comes down to is that I am impatient. I want people to read it all right now. I’m not much of a tease. Working on it, though!

I posted a short piece for the Story Fix Peer Review Page and then sent my friends and followers over there to harass and/or comment on the post. It turned out pretty well and I feel like I got some good advice from the writing community. And a few “wow”s, which… I’m not going to lie, felt really great. REALLY great. The piece wasn’t torn apart and I feel like it was a good representation of my writing.

I have been doing a lot of reading. I’m doing the GoodReads Reading Challenge. I committed to reading 50 books this year. I’m at 30 and I am 2 books behind. I’m really tempted to pick some short novellas and finish them to boost my count, but I feel like that would be cheating, so I am doing my best to stay on top of my TBR pile. My hiatus from the written word hurt me a bit but I am rapid and voracious reader. I was five books behind!  In the last month I have read:  Read the rest of this entry »


#FridayReads, the Long Lost Participant Edition

by MJones

 Haven’t done this in awhile. Back when I had my breakdown I stopped doing everything, including reading. I committed to reading 50 books this year and I am behind by about four books, so I am back in the saddle.

Just finished:

Silver Sparrow by Tayari Jones - incredibly compelling read. The first part sets the scene… part two sort of blew the top off of my head.  I just kept turning pages to find out what else was going to happen, while biting my nails and trying not to blink. Fantastic book, my fave from Ms. Jones, though I did really enjoy The Untelling.

 Recently started:

Snowy Night Seduction  by Arianna Hart- Just started this one, lightly paranormal. I’m starting to be able to stand a bit of the genre but I’ll never be a twilight/fairy prince/zombie apocalypse reader.

Married 2 Struggle  by Varrsity  -Suggested to me by a twitter follower. I’ve read the first few pages and I’m captivated. Can’t wait to dig in!

Up Next:

The Lies That Bind  by D.L. Sparks- For some reason when I discover an author, I am compelled to read everything they’ve written. I follow Ms. Sparks on twitter and pre-ordered her next book, but how can I read that one when I haven’t read this one?!

I’ve recently added a ton of Pearl Cleage to my list… I have two eBooks from her that I’ll start soon. Looking forward to it.

I’m supposed to be reading one “writing craft” book a month. Meh. They just don’t really tell me anything. I do have the Write Great Fiction Series that I haven’t finished, so I can leaf through that, I guess. I just don’t really get much from reading books. I get far more from blogs and from practice.

Those are my Friday Reads! What’re yours?

Hope everyone plans to have a fantastic weekend!


WIP Wednesday, all late and such

by MJones

Yeah. I meant to post yesterday but what had happened was…

Sometimes I just don’t have much to say, or I have too much to say and I don’t feel like typing it out. There’s only so many times I can say ‘I”m working on two things and they are going okay and also I’m pretty sure that I suck as a writer but then again I think I’m pretty good.” It gets hard to even remember that week after week. So, I don’t blog to blog, I blog when I have something to say.

Finding something to say is the problem.  So, on WIP Wednesdays we talk about progress on our current works. Well. New Project is sitting exactly where it has been sitting for weeks. It’s just not coming together and I don’t know what to do with it, really.

I wrote a ficlet (very short fanfic) that will be posted at the archive on Aug.2nd. The longer story, the sequel to last year’s story will be posted on August 7th. I’m over 6,000 words in and just over halfway done, according to my not-really-an-outline. I have planned a sex scene… or two.. and those honestly take a little time to come together. They are harder to write than one would imagine. I need some time to gather some uh, inspiration. I’m hoping to do a long sprint this weekend (in between directing the lawn guy and cleaning up the house) and finishing this weekend. It has to go through the Beta process before it gets posted.

Tonight, I’m really excited to be headed to a book signing by local author Tayari Jones. She’ll be talking about her recent release Silver Sparrow, which i’m almost finished reading. I wanted to finish it before her signing tonight and I hope I make it. I have just a few chapters to go and I might be sneaking in a page or two here at work. SHHHHHHHHHHH!

Since I have that signing, I will probably not be writing tonight but I shall be on it tomorrow! Everyone pray that my boss goes golfing or something.


AWC: Using Passive Voice & Guest Bernice McFadden

by MJones

Hello, fellow writers. It has been a LONG day. I did a little shopping (read: I went to Target for Charmin and spent $37) and attended my first Writer’s Club meeting, which was very exciting because we had a guest speaker today: Ms. Bernice McFadden, author of Sugar, Glorious, Nowhere is a Place and 9 other novels. I read Sugar in 2009 and STILL tell everyone to read it when they ask me about great books. I posted my review of Sugar here.

Our meeting started with a 5 minute grammar lesson by English teacher Mary Grace Schaap on Passive Voice and when to use it. The lesson was really instrumental, because I can count on two hands how many times I’ve read advice to avoid it. However, Ms Schaap showed us how using Passive Voice adds a little style and mystery to your writing, no matter the genre. Most often, it is used when you want to hide certain details.

Verbs can either be active or passive. In active voice, the verb is said to do or be. It is direct. In passive voice, the object is acted upon. The effect is wordy and the sentence lacks spice but is most useful when the attention belongs on the person or thing being acted upon, and not the action itself or when the do-er is unimportant. In fact, the do-er can in many cases be left off of the end of the sentence, especially if you’re suing a  ’by’ as in the policy was approved by the committee. It’s just superfluous words. 

Crime novels and journalists use Passive Voice:

The missing child was found a mile from her home

The jewels were stolen in broad daylight

Mistakes were made

Genres like poetry use Passive Voice beautifully:

Soothed by the Sea

Rocked by waves

The key, said Ms Schaap, is to know WHY you’re using Passive Voice. Recognize the effect or style that you want to put into your piece and you’ll stand up to any proofreader or editor’s criticism. Great lesson, and she used sentence diagrams, which I used to LOVE in English classes. I was the nerd grinning in the fifth row. :)

After our 5 Minute Grammar primer, the President of the Club introduced Bernice McFadden. Ms. McFadden began her talk by taking us through the journey of her career. As a child, she was a voracious reader, digesting mostly picture books until she found some Harold Robbins and Jackie Collins novels that weren’t meant for such young eyes. It reminded me of when I was about 12 and found my mother’s stash of VC Andrews. I was forbidden to read them, but over the course of the summer, read the entire Flowers in The Attic series and have never been the same. After writing a pretty graphic story (of which she had no idea what she’d really written, since she’d just lifted sentences and phrases from the books she read), thus began her journey as a writer.  Read the rest of this entry »


The Peach Keeper by Sarah Addison Allen [Review]

by MJones

The Peach KeeperThe Peach Keeper by Sarah Addison Allen

My rating: 4 of 5 stars

This is my second book by Sarah Addison Allen and I really enjoyed it. I’m a reader of pretty heavy material, so every once in awhile, I like to clear my palate with some lighter fare and Ms Allen always delivers a fun, indulgent read laced with sweetness and a little bit of magic.

Willa Jackson, Colin and Paxton Osgood, and Sebastian Rogers all went to high school together and all but Paxton (who never left) returned years later, completely changed people. The story centers around a Gala, a formal party to celebrate the re-opening of the Blue Ridge Madam, led by Paxton and the Women’s Society. Just as the Madam is about to open,a skeleton is found, tying Willa, Colin and Paxton together via their ancestors and a well kept secret.

The Peach Keeper is more than a story about a magical man who smelled of peaches and once held an entire town under his spell, and who suddenly and mysteriously disappeared… and then reappeared as a skeleton just as Walls of Water’s premiere luxury hotel was to reopen. It is a story of regrets, of self reinvention, of resistance to change and letting go of fears, and most of all of being true to oneself.

There was a lot less magic in this book than in The Girl Who Chased the Moon– I really expected more and perhaps the story could have benefited from it, but I also felt the story was full– each character had a purpose for being in the book and each character lived up to his or her potential. I especially enjoyed the scandal between Tucker, Agatha (Paxton and Colin Osgood’s grandmother), and Georgie (Willa Jackson’s grandmother. I wanted there to be a bit more detail about covering up the secret and what it had taken to keep it quiet.

And I’ll say this, because romances in books, by definition are unrealistic, but the romantic connections, to me, seem to be a stretch. Too pat and perfect and… unrealistic. I guess I am hard to please, and these relationships needed to form in order to push the story along. I was happy to see some old friendships rekindle, and some begin for the first time. I’m still sort of appalled that people still live in the town where they went to high school.

I gave this book 4 of 5 stars, purely because I enjoyed it so much!

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Chocolate & Vicodin by Jennette Fulda [Review]

by MJones

Chocolate and Vicodin: My Quest for Relief from the Headache that Wouldn't Go AwayChocolate and Vicodin: My Quest for Relief from the Headache that Wouldn’t Go Away by Jennette Fulda

My rating: 4 of 5 stars

Finished this book in about a day… very compelling read. I’ve been an avid reader of PastaQueen for nearly three years. Back when I was trying to lose some weight (never did manage to outrun those lbs, the suckers) I was looking for inspiration and someone linked her blog and I was hooked, right away. I love a success story, and when Jennette Fulda, the Queen of Pasta herself, announced that she was writing a book, I was ultra excited.

Chocolate and Vicodin is her second book, about the headache that is like the Little Engine That Could. Since February 2008, Jennette has had a constant headache. At a time in her life when she should be deliriously happy and celebrating, she is knocked to her knees by debilitating head pain. My father suffers from chronic migraines and back pain on a constant basis, has for as long as I can remember. I have friends who are migraine sufferers. If nothing, Chocolate and Vicodin brings the experience home and puts it into words which are down to earth and even humorous. I don’t know how Jennette does it… if I’d had a headache for 3 years, I would be pretty unbearable right now.

I cried on page 96 and laughed on page 113. In fact, I laughed on every other page. Jennette’s natural dry humor and wit give this book a great personality. I really enjoyed it. Well done.

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#Friday Reads 2/25

by MJones

It’s that time again! Friday Reads is when we talk about what we’re readin’!

My reading has been considerably slower this month than last. I was entirely more productive in January than February, but in my defense, I had a lot of writing I wanted to get done. Since I’ve finished that story  (that was hanging over my head),  I have more time. I wish I could say I’ve filled it with reading, but that would only be a 1/4 truth. Not even a half truth. *shame*

On with it! Let’s chat about what I’m reading… these are the books most active in my ‘Currently Reading Pile’.

I’ve been an avid reader of PastaQueen for nearly three years. Back when I was trying to lose some weight (never did manage to outrun those lbs, the suckers) I was looking for inspiration and someone linked her blog and I was hooked, right away. I love a success story, and when Jennette Fulda, the Queen of Pasta herself, announced that she was writing a book, I was ultra excited. Half Assed, her weight loss memoir, was her first. Chocolate and Vicodin is her second, about the headache that is like the Little Engine That Could. Since February 2008, Jennette has had a constant headache. At a time in her life when she should be deliriously happy and celebrating, she is knocked to her knees by debilitating head pain. My father suffers from chronic migraines and back pain on a constant basis, has for as long as I can remember. I have friends who are migraine sufferers. If nothing, Chocolate and Vicodin brings the experience home and puts it into words which are down to earth and even humorous. I don’t know how Jennette does it… if I’d had  a headache for 3 years, I would be pretty unbearable right now. Great read so far… very entertaining.

Minding Ben , by Victoria Brown p. 26 of 352 (7%)

I won this book through Goodreads FirstReads program. It took a bit to get into it, but I’m now on my way! This book promises to be The Nanny Diaries meets The Help (have read both and hold both in high regard). It is the story of Grace, a young woman from Trinidad who travels to New York in search of the American Dream. What she finds is work with a family that pays meager wages for demanding work and an underground network of the West Indian babysitting community. I’m interested in digging into this book further.

Daughter of Joy , by Kathleen Morgan p. 46 of 336 (13%)

It’s odd that I am a Christian but I shy away from Christian fiction. I often find it preachy, instead of simply having a book where the characters are believers and not… I dunno…  non believers. If I want to read a sermon, I will open my Bible, or tune into the 800million churches here in ATL that broadcast their nightly services. I stumbled upon this book and decided to read it without realizing that it was Christian fiction. I kept reading it because it is also historical fiction, sort of a favorite genre, lately. Abigail Stanton is a widow who’s child recently passed away. She’s looking for an escape from her old life while she heals, and happens upon Culdee Creek’s Conor McKay, a surly-yet-handsome, wifeless man with a wild one of a daughter and a son who’s on the wind.  This story seems pretty predictable, but then again a lot of love stories are. That won’t stop anyone from reading them. This one is moving a bit slowly, but I am determined to stick with it.

Slammerkin , by Emma Donoghue p. 50 of 408 (12%)

I haven’t read past my last spot a few weeks ago. This book reads entirely more difficult than Room. I am interested in the story but it is set in London. Which, for no reason, is about my least favorite setting in a book. Slammerkin might join the ranks of Stiff, another book I just haven’t been able to dig into.

Damage , by John Lescroart p. 103 of 416 (24%)

Made  a bit of progress in this book this week. Lescroart does a great job of building suspense, piling story elements on top of each other like bricks. It really is just beginning to get good. I’ll probably dig into this over the weekend. Did I mention I miss Dismas Hardy?


#FridayReads Jan 28

by MJones

It’s Friday again, and time for another #FridayReads! Every Friday, we booklovers chat it up about what we’re reading. Here’s my list:

Water for Elephants, by Sara Gruen – Sad to say, I’m not enjoying this book. Actually I’m not enjoying the audio book. I have the physical book and I’ll probably switch to that. The audio-book is always a matter of a compelling story that I can get lost in and an excellent narrator. I DO NOT like the narrator for this book and I find I just don’t care about the main character quite yet. I’ll pick up the eBook version this week where I left off.

Damage, by John Lescroart- Another new book I started but have only read a page, so far. I LOVE Lescroart so I’m not worried about this book at all. Hoping to spend most of my weekend buried in this one.

Roseflower Creek, by Jackie Lee Miles -I got this book as a freebie from Amazon/B&N. Just started it, seems interesting and a good read, but I’m not far enough into it to say what I like, don’t like. It’s set in the 1950′s south (so you know I’m all over it) . This book begins, “The morning I died it rained. Poured down so hard it washed the blood off my face.” I’m hooked.

Stif , by Mary Roach- Still chugging away at this book. I really want to enjoy it, it’s just sort of boring. I am going to try to get it out of the way this weekend so I can stop looking at it on my Currently Reading list.

The Help,  by Katherine Stockett- I’m listening to this audio book in the car. I read the book back in 2009, thoroughly enjoyed it and am happy to be revisiting it. Since it’s an old book, I’m not counting it toward my 2011 goal.


The Kitchen House by Kathleen Grissom [Review]

by MJones

The Kitchen HouseThe Kitchen House by Kathleen Grissom

My rating: 5 of 5 stars

I have to start by saying I LOVED THIS BOOK. I got this as an audio book, a something to listen to that would ease my traffic woes and it WORKED. I can only concentrate on audio books in the car, so it got to where I was making up reasons to leave the house. A trip across the street became a reason to get 10 more minutes in. I savored every bite and morsel I could get, and though it only took me a few days to listen to it all, it felt like this book would never end, and yet I could not stop “reading”.

Lavinia, orphaned at 7 years old, has been brought to Tall Oaks Tobacco plantation as an indentured servant. She’s put under the guidance of Belle, Captain Pike’s illegitimate daughter, and Mama Mae, the matriarch of the “family”. Over the years, Belle begins to feel as if Tall Oaks is her home and the servants are her family, even though she is white and they are black. She also doesn’t seem to know the difference between herself and the others and no one feels the need to point it out. Lavinia only learns that she is quite different when she is allowed to go to church and doesn’t understand why her friends the twins must stand at the back of the church while she is allowed to sit up front.

Eventually, Lavinia is accepted into the world of the big house, where she finds that all that glitters is not gold. The Captain, though kind to his servants is absent and the mistress falls prey to an addiction. The Captain’s family believe that Belle is the Master’s mistress, not his daughter, so there is tension in the household among Belle and Mrs. Pike.

This situation, though not altogether pleasant, is not the nightmare it could be, and of course is too good to be true. When the Master falls ill and eventually dies, here comes trouble and the start fury and upheaval at Tall Oaks, so much that I could not mentally turn the pages fast enough. Captain Pike’s son Marshall becomes the new Master and he is nowhere near the kind soul his father was. Tall Oaks descends into a nightmare.

The Kitchen House is full of suspense, and moments where I said loud, “No, don’t!’ and “Oh you dumbass!” and ‘I want someone to shoot Marshall!”

I felt the main characters were well defined, and when even they weren’t, it was frustrating, but fitting. The story bounces between Lavinia and Belle, and since we see the story through their eyes, feel their confusion and pain, it’s only right that we don’t know the entire story from everyone’s point of view.

I found myself alternately rooting for and upset with Lavinia. Her naivete and ignorance was annoying, and the “family’s” insistence on keeping her within that cloud made for a lot of drama. So many times, issues could have been resolved without punishment if someone would have just said something… but they decided not to and the drama continued.

I was completely enthralled with this story– it is well written with an incredible climax and a satisfying ending. I would be very excited to read more from Kathleen Grissom. I very very rarely give five stars to a book, but this novel is simply perfection. As an added note, the narrators for the audio book are so well suited that when I re-read the print copy of this book, I will hear their voices in the back of my mind.

A wonderfully well written, compelling first novel.

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#FridayReads- January 21, 2011

by MJones

This is my first time participating in #FridayReads, started by The Book Studio’s Bethanne Patrick. We talk about what we’re reading. We tag it on twitter as #FridayReads. Simple as that!

I have a few irons in the fire, as always:

The Kitchen House - I’m “reading” this via audio book. It was a slow start, but I’m becoming completely hooked by it, to the point where I will get home from work and sit in the car for another 10 minutes to get to the end of a chapter. This story is told by 2 narrators– Lavinia, who is an Irish orphan turned indentured servant, and Belle, the biracial daughter of the plantation owner. There is… so much drama in this book and I know I could read it faster than I’m listening to it, but I’m MUCH enjoying the distraction from traffic. Even if I’m just going across the street to St@rbucks, I make sure I bring the iPhone, so I can listen to a few minutes. I love historical fiction and this totally fits the bill.

Glorious- I don’t know what’s with this book. I read McFadden’s Sugar, and the follow up This Bitter Earth.  I couldn’t get into the Black Magic theme of This Bitter Earth, but it was still written leaps and bounds better than Glorious. It seems to me like this book was spat out and published, unedited, beta-ed, read for clarity…I’m reading it because  I want to know what happens in the story, but I’m disappointed in the book itself.

Stiff: The Curious Lives of Human Cadavers- I’m a weirdo, and I watch a lot of shows on forensic science, investigation, things like that. CSI in its early years was a staple on my TiVO, until the stories became more about drama, less about science, and even then it was more science fiction. I watch a lot of Forensic Files, The Investigators, Dr G, Medical Examiner, simply because I am intrigued by such things. I thought I would really dig into this book and it was initially really interesting, talking about how much had changed in how doctors performed surgeries,  and then later changes in autopsy and burial. At the point I’ve reached, Roach is droning on and on about the cadavers and human lives and feelings and I find I just don’t care about who the cadavers used to be. Tell me about what the cadavers are doing now, and why, and HOW. Ugh. I’m pushing through, but slowly. I’ll give it a few more chapters before I hang it up.

What are YOU reading? Tell me (us) about it, tweet it and don’t forget to add the hashtag #FridayReads!


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