Comments on: Fest!:50 Followers Baking Blogfest

By: Amalia T.

Amalia T. — Wed, 05 May 2010 04:35:20 +0000

This was a great scene– you had strong and fun character dynamics and a solid focus on the pizza making! I could see everything but didn’t feel bogged down by the details. Nicely done!

By: Ashley Ladd

Ashley Ladd — Sun, 02 May 2010 17:26:30 +0000

Love it. Now I’m hungry for pizza, too. We’re getting to go to the bowling alley, so maybe I’ll pick up a piece there.

Good scene.

My baking scene is at:

http://ashleyladd.blogspot.com/2010/05/blogfest-baking-scene.html

By: Melanie Sherman

Melanie Sherman — Sun, 02 May 2010 14:25:11 +0000

Fun entry. I’m proud of her that she made them learn how to make the pizza. Maybe she can put in an order next time. Heh heh.

By: MissM

MissM — Sat, 01 May 2010 23:59:06 +0000

Thank you for hosting! It actually made me write!

By: Charity Bradford

Charity Bradford — Sat, 01 May 2010 23:51:54 +0000

Thanks for joining the fun today. Pizza is one of my favorite things to make and I laughed because this read like making pizza with my kids. Um, without the innuendo though. Lol.

By: MissM

MissM — Sat, 01 May 2010 23:49:14 +0000

Yeah I am pretty hungry from reading other entries.

By: MissM

MissM — Sat, 01 May 2010 23:48:22 +0000

Yeah, I actually laughed, too! I pretty much figure that men don’t mature past 7th grade when it comes to certain things.

By: KM

KM — Sat, 01 May 2010 22:42:45 +0000

Okay, I have to admit that I laughed at the ball covered in flour. Then, your character laughed, which made me laugh even harder. Umm…can you say ’7th grade boy humor’?? lol Cute scene. More men need to know how to cook!

By: Iapetus999

Iapetus999 — Sat, 01 May 2010 19:27:47 +0000

Pizza and beer?? Sold!
I’m going to gain 10lbs on this blogfest.
Nice job!